So far so very good. No, make it excellent. I have read over 200 stories about Ranma and your plot is well thought and built, and your style is smooth, flood-free and not dry.

Amazing.

Grammar wasn't perfect, but it was more then acceptable.

Plot wasn't to intricate. Yet that the beauty of it.

Character Depth, was indubitably a high point.

If one were superficial it wouldn't seem that great. Doesn't sound that great either. Yet the whole entire story in itself is a success.

Added to my Favorite Stories list.

I love this story. I do think that you have tweeked the chars ever so slightly off cannon, but i think it makes this story better not worse. and you could proboly convince me i was wrong if we argued about it. maby.

YAYS! IS CUTE!

I absolutely love this story, but I have a question about the homework topic. How the heck did Ranma even get into calculus if he sleeps in class? Was this a veiled reference to hidden intelligence or was it just some random topic off the top of your head?

Hi I just finished reading Power and am writing to say that I fully enjoyed reading your story. After the first chapter of reading this I instantly got hooked on it. And as I finished it I couldn't help but feel sad that I finished it . P Hopefully you are continuing to write more stories to keep Ranma fans entertained! Oh and is there a continuation of this story by any chance? :P

Fantastic story.

deals with soem very real issues in a well written and thoughtful way.

well done.

HEY YO,ALL I GOTTA SAY IS THAT WAS ONE OF THE GREATEST STORIES THAT I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE, TOTALLY RESET THE STANDARD ON WHAT A FANFIC SHOULD SOUND YOU WROTE THIS STORY WITHOUT HAVING TO MAKE ANY CHANGES TO THE NEED FOR PREFRENCES TO SEX,ALTERNATE UNIVERSES OR ANY ,YOU DID IT WITH ONLY USING A HANDFUL OF WOULD OF BEEN GREAT IF YOU WOULD OF HAD A HUGE BLOWOUT ENDING INSTEAD OF A CLIFFHANGER,BUT THEN AGAIN,ALL THE CLASSICS END THAT SUM IT UP FROM BOTTOM TO TOP,MS. TAKAHASHI NEEDS TO READ THIS,MAKE A MOVIE OUT OF IT,GIVE YOU A JOB OR SOMETHING.

I'm glad I found this story! I greatly enjoyed it, and I wish ir didn't end here. You wouldn't hapen to be making a sequel would you? After all the race isn't quite finished yet... and I DO heart Shampoo... In any case I'd be happy to give toy any suport I can in regards to a sequel.

Holy shit this sucks,

Well the story it self don't suck, But i realy don't like it.

ONE OF THE BEST RANMA STORIES EVER RANMA/SHAMPOO KICK ASS MAKE MORE PLZ if u see this but awesome anyway

Ranma and Shampoo favorite coupling... also I hate Akane with a passion. Not that I'm utterly and completely against Ranma and Akane if it's written well, but they rarely are. Oh well, a great fic.

I really love your fanfic Power. I love it so much that I would like to post it on my new website called Ranma Romance Fanfictions. If you want to check it out here it is rrfanfictions/. Please email me asap.

Man, this was awesome! I don't know about the Ranma's characterization in being so dang single-minded, but I have to admit, it does suit him.
I'm a big Shampoo fan too, though in my case it stems from a hatred of the evil tomboy. And say what you will about your own view of her, but this Akane was Bitcho Numero Uno. I mean, come on! "I can put on a necklace that makes me super-strong! That'll prove that I'm worthy of the respect a true martial artist deserves!" And the way she taunted him was pretty sickening too. I was rather disappointed that she ultimately got off with a knockout poke and having her romantic dreams crushed and ground into the dirt.
But why am I rambling on? Great work, Shampoo rocks!
Power to the Amazons! 'Cept Mousse.

Hm... I'm impressed. A fairly solid fic with a fairly non-fairytale ending. When the "exchange thoughts" scene occured, I did groan a bit - mystical bonds, fate, destiny, ect, are quite cliche - but it was handled quite well.
Oh, and a story actually FINISHING is rather nice too.