| Reviews for Asphyxia |
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Apples 7/13/12 . chapter 6 I know your kind of dead right now and not updating anything... But please, if you ever get your writing mojo back, you should continue this. I'm sure the idea of Squffentine to be fleshed out is something this fandom needs ._. but great so far C: |
delipig 1/6/12 . chapter 6What sucks about finding such an amazing author is that I have to wait for updates B( Get your butt in gear darling get me some lovely updates on /all/ your stories. Especially HAT even if it's just a sequel to it or something /tear |
3134135162 9/18/11 . chapter 6 I love your writing,it's so interesting!I'm looking forward seeing how Leon and Vincent being withYuffie. |
CheshireRedfern 6/3/11 . chapter 6update please! |
chubbypenguin 12/29/10 . chapter 6awww, vinnie is still a grumpy poo, as expected. i'm glad he wasn't found in his coffin. personally i kinda like this awkward but close relationship yuffie and leon have, i hope they make up soon. i feel like you put a lot of thought into this story. update soon! |
chubbypenguin 12/29/10 . chapter 5yeaaa! Vinnies back, i was waiting for him to make an appearance. |
chubbypenguin 12/29/10 . chapter 4aww... leons a jerk. story is getting interesting. |
buildabear4you 12/27/10 . chapter 6I am so glad to see that you are writing again. I've been a fan of your writing for a long time. Anyway i love the story so far,the interactions between the characters have been fantastic. Huge Vincent fan, and I love the way your write him. Fantastic. |
Ashes 12/19/10 . chapter 6 Wow.. I love it so far! Especially the character interactions and relations, it's well written and easy to connect with! Keep up the wonderful work and I look forward to more! |
AmbivalentAngyl 12/18/10 . chapter 6I don't think vincent was too chatty. Some people portray him like a mute then he has no personality but you had the proper balance for him. I'm starting to see the flames of jealousy and its got me all wired up |
Nandi 12/16/10 . chapter 6 Nice long chapter, I like. :D VINCENT! Haha, adorable as always, and in my humble opinion he's perfectly in character. I particularly enjoyed that last paragraph - aww, Leon and Yuffie are so comfortable with each other, and aww, jealous Vincent. xD Of course, I appreciate Leon's protectiveness too, especially Leon's reflections right after Vincent says Yuffie's name. :D Unfortunately, my school gets out a full three days before Christmas, so I'll be studying for my finals on the week of Christmas...fun...so hopefully you'll have that Christmas fic out so I can have something to look forward to. ;) |
serenbach 12/16/10 . chapter 6I really enjoyed Vincent's reflections on their journey and his talk with Yuffie at the end. I also really enjoyed Leon's little moment of jealosy as well. Serves him right! I really can't wait for more. :) |
FlysWithNoWings 12/12/10 . chapter 5Yay they found Vinnie! :D I'm really enjoying this story and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Liv |
always-kh 12/6/10 . chapter 5 nice chapter. i like the bit with her asking if he's a vampire because it really, really fits. and it's funny. :) |
always-kh 12/6/10 . chapter 2 interesting idea i like it. though i think near the end there Leon would look at her strangely too but for different reasons than the rest. i mean crawling into a coffin would seem ridiculous to anyone. |