Hi! (This is a review for all the chapters, BTW)

I LOVE this so far! I can't wait to see where you take the story next. Loren is really cool: interesting to read about and well-devolped. All of her Pokemon rock too; so much personality! That one you made up is particularly interesting... the part with the Point of Honor was pretty clever too. I await the next chapter eagerly!

Love,

Twisted Alyx

...You haven't updated in more than a year...I'm sad now...Oh, well! I still enjoyed reading it!

Topaz was right, you are one of the greatest authors! I bow to thy mighty author-poweriness! *bow bow* Could you read my Poke'fics? I would be honored if you reviewed, even as a flame. ^_^

-Miroku004, League Master

Well, I'm hooked! Must read on!

Cool... Interesting viewpoint, here. Never thoguht I'd see this kinda story in MY lifetime...

Hi! Great story! How often do you get to update? I'm looking forward to the next installment. It's good to see a story like this written well instead of being just a bunch of ideas with potential. You've done really well. Bye for now,

The Mad Tortoise.

More excess spaces, but I can live! Your taking a very orginal way with describing your training techniques, way cool. And polite! Gee, you really take your time with each chapter, which few do! What colour is the shiny Teddiursa? A bit more description there would help. Your very inventive with everything you do. OOH! CREATED POKEMON!! You've won me! You've even described it perfectly!
ALL MIGHTY AUTHOR, I BOW BEFORE THEE!!

Firstly, Cadmuse is an idiot, the fact Morbane has such an expanse of fiction as compared you your measly ZERO renders HER better than YOU!
Now, firstly a brilliant idea, very intriging just bringing in the readers. I don't really like the large spaces between lines, cos I'm lazy and I hate scrolling. I like the idea of Loren's companion Pokemon being a Mantine, they're barely mentioned in most fictions. You've also taken the time to add history to her, giving her a family and flaws is excellent! I like the description and odd actions, like keeping the item from the PokeMart. I also like your nicknames! Oh that's a really good twist! She's into PKMN Breeding! It really works with your battling style of writing though you could add some more action, description stuff. I have got to continue reading!

Hello! I have a lot of free time the week before Spring Break! Anyway, are you going to update this? Huh?

This fic is progressing very nicely, Morbaine. Sorry I haven't reviewed until just now but I have been reading it. Though I have one superficial problem with this fic. When you describe Scarmory's wings, I doubt that any natural-born creature would have a body made of aluminum. Steel-types have bodies that resemble metal but I don't think they actually are metal...but then again it is just as hard to believe that a Venusaur could have a giant flower growing out of its back or that a Charizard could have a everlasting flame on its tail, so maybe Skarmory can be made out of aluminum. Hmmm...now I feel rather stupid.

Another fic that doesn't deserve to be read further. *Cut the melodrama*.

I might have never have found this story if I hadn't linked back from your review (thanx!) but now I'm very happy I did ! What a wonderful start so far ! This is going on my favourites list. Keep up the great writing !

~ IJ

Great. Very nice description of a Blitzkat, interesting perspective on formal Release, pretty name for the Doduo. Good job!

Cooool!!! This is great, please finish!

Ooooo excellent story! This is good! Really good!
Please write more!

Now for a little bit of irrelvancy... I have seen Mewtwo Returns and I kinda understand that the clone Pikachu and Meowth were not really zany characters. (Expecially not the Pikachu, and he's the zaniest!) I did the whole whacked out personalites to add a little humor to the situations. Hehehe... I can hardly write anything without some humor. Ok I'll shut up now... Toodles