Reviews for The Pokémon Gods

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Twisted Alyx 2005-07-03 ch 1,	abuseHi! (This is a review for all the chapters, BTW) I LOVE this so far! I can't wait to see where you take the story next. Loren is really cool: interesting to read about and well-devolped. All of her Pokemon rock too; so much personality! That one you made up is particularly interesting... the part with the Point of Honor was pretty clever too. I await the next chapter eagerly! Love, Twisted Alyx
Miroku004 2003-11-14 ch 3,	abuse...You haven't updated in more than a year...I'm sad now...Oh, well! I still enjoyed reading it!
Miroku004 2003-11-14 ch 2,	abuseTopaz was right, you are one of the greatest authors! I bow to thy mighty author-poweriness! bow bow Could you read my Poke'fics? I would be honored if you reviewed, even as a flame. ^_^ -Miroku004, League Master
Miroku004 2003-11-14 ch 1,	abuseWell, I'm hooked! Must read on!
Angel Angamaite 2003-10-18 ch 3,	abuseCool... Interesting viewpoint, here. Never thoguht I'd see this kinda story in MY lifetime...
The Mad Tortoise 2003-10-17 ch 3,	abuseHi! Great story! How often do you get to update? I'm looking forward to the next installment. It's good to see a story like this written well instead of being just a bunch of ideas with potential. You've done really well. Bye for now, The Mad Tortoise.
TopazSoarhire 2003-09-25 ch 3,	abuseMore excess spaces, but I can live! Your taking a very orginal way with describing your training techniques, way cool. And polite! Gee, you really take your time with each chapter, which few do! What colour is the shiny Teddiursa? A bit more description there would help. Your very inventive with everything you do. OOH! CREATED POKEMON!! You've won me! You've even described it perfectly! ALL MIGHTY AUTHOR, I BOW BEFORE THEE!!
TopazSoarhire 2003-09-18 ch 1,	abuseFirstly, Cadmuse is an idiot, the fact Morbane has such an expanse of fiction as compared you your measly ZERO renders HER better than YOU! Now, firstly a brilliant idea, very intriging just bringing in the readers. I don't really like the large spaces between lines, cos I'm lazy and I hate scrolling. I like the idea of Loren's companion Pokemon being a Mantine, they're barely mentioned in most fictions. You've also taken the time to add history to her, giving her a family and flaws is excellent! I like the description and odd actions, like keeping the item from the PokeMart. I also like your nicknames! Oh that's a really good twist! She's into PKMN Breeding! It really works with your battling style of writing though you could add some more action, description stuff. I have got to continue reading!
Book Worm 4.0 2003-03-12 ch 3,	abuseHello! I have a lot of free time the week before Spring Break! Anyway, are you going to update this? Huh?
Lobo Kendo 2003-01-31 ch 3,	abuseThis fic is progressing very nicely, Morbaine. Sorry I haven't reviewed until just now but I have been reading it. Though I have one superficial problem with this fic. When you describe Scarmory's wings, I doubt that any natural-born creature would have a body made of aluminum. Steel-types have bodies that resemble metal but I don't think they actually are metal...but then again it is just as hard to believe that a Venusaur could have a giant flower growing out of its back or that a Charizard could have a everlasting flame on its tail, so maybe Skarmory can be made out of aluminum. Hmmm...now I feel rather stupid.
Cadmuse 2002-12-08 ch 1,	abuseAnother fic that doesn't deserve to be read further. Cut the melodrama.
Ankhutenshi 2002-09-28 ch 3,	abuseI might have never have found this story if I hadn't linked back from your review (thanx!) but now I'm very happy I did ! What a wonderful start so far ! This is going on my favourites list. Keep up the great writing ! ~ IJ
Miss Black Dragon 2002-05-31 ch 3,	abuseGreat. Very nice description of a Blitzkat, interesting perspective on formal Release, pretty name for the Doduo. Good job!
Miss Black Dragon 2002-05-31 ch 2,	abuseCooool!!! This is great, please finish!
Kawaii Spinel Queen of Evil 2002-05-31 ch 3,	abuseOoooo excellent story! This is good! Really good! Please write more! Now for a little bit of irrelvancy... I have seen Mewtwo Returns and I kinda understand that the clone Pikachu and Meowth were not really zany characters. (Expecially not the Pikachu, and he's the zaniest!) I did the whole whacked out personalites to add a little humor to the situations. Hehehe... I can hardly write anything without some humor. Ok I'll shut up now... Toodles

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