This fic is fantastic! What can i say? Lets see... the description - its awesome. The thing I most respect about your style of writing is the different personalities and the bonds you are able to create with words. It takes a very talented writer to create such fine fics and you are really tallented.

Fury aka Mist

AARRG! I THOUGHT I REVIEWED IT!

Anyway...I will hurt Moon's previous trainer when I get my hands on them...

Harmony: Cool down, L-S. *grabs her by shirt collar just before she bolts off to wreak vengeance*

Crimson: So Loren gets to travel with Caira? Will we find out what she means by Chosen?

L-S: Can't wait to hear about some of these other people, Loren's friends! HARMONY, LET ME GO!

Harmony: Not on your life.

Crimson: Well, before this turns into all-out warfare, we'd best be going. Great story, keep up the good work!

Wonderful story! I already added it to my favorite story list. ;D Not to mention this is a great inspirational work for me, it got me started on this fic I've been mean to write forever.

*gets down on her knees* Please add another chapter soooooooon. _

Toreina-Mei : The Dark Trainer

Another good flow into the story line. I like that you had Loren's pokémon with their own distinct personalities, flaws, and personal problems. One problemin page format though, this is just a small problem: The actions of pokémon or humans is a little bit too far from each other, other than that... there does not seem to be anything wrong with your fic. Please continue writing more to this, I want to know more.

Maiku

Fabulous! Great! But don't stop now!

Hmm. This is a very well written Poke battle in here. It's an interesting new trainer fic. A good rapport story as well. Well written. All in all, I have to say it's an example of all that is right in a new trainer piece. Using a trainer with lots of theoretical knowledge and lower-ability Pokemon is a neat mix I haven't seen used otherwise. More, please.

**claps** Excellent story, it gave me a new way to type up Pokémon battles I thank you for that AND for reviewing my fic, I'm returning the favor.

Maiku

YOU HAVE CREATED ANOTHER GENIUS WORK! I envy you...I don't know HOW you do it, but I wish I had your talent. I LIKE LOREN! She's an awesome trainer! But what is Caira? Is she a new Pokemon that you created? Or is she something else? YOU MUST TELL ME! Oh, and just for the record, you put all my fics to shame, and I will now be your devoted reader from now until eternity. Okay, now I have to go. Bye!

Wow! I'm impressed! I like it! Even my chapters aren't that long!(I am well known for long chapters where I live) I like it! Caira is her more, if you would. I like it, good job! More please!