dude it kicked ass you made daria and jane prefect it was real

Yes! Yes! The rotten little bastard died! Wahoo! (Does the watusi on Sloan's grave. Jumps for joy when she sees Scrappy-Doo and The Great Gazoo are burried next to the hateful little Cousin Oliver.)

That story must have been good, because I got all dewey eyed towards the end. But I don't think you put in enough lobotomies (just kidding)

Aww...;_; That was wonderful! So sad...

this is such a tuching story. i wanna cry. well not really but yeah it sounded good right. i was a very good story. janes tost was a cute. ok well yeah i reall ylike that story. well talk to u later

MORGANI DON'T NOT CRY FOR STORYS BUT IT STILL IS SAD

sorry it wont let me log on but this is JaNe-LaNe, if you want proof, look me up, i will be there D lol

well anyway

great fic! i really liked it! keep up the good work!

-JaNe-LaNe

Good story, had a few misspelled words but other than that pretty moving...But I was kinda looking forward to reading about Daria actually going to any event that was officially "FORMAL", especially a prom; so it was kind of a let down in that respect. Overall this is the 2nd best Daria fanfic I've read so far, next to "REBOOTING". :)

Very good- depressing- but good. It made me hope that I will never drink and drive. I don't want to end up dead before prom!

Eeeei!

You put "Wish You Were Here" by Pink Floyd in here...that's one of my absolute favorite songs by those guys.

I liked the story. It was really good. Sad topic but I like how you threw in some humor now and then (loved the KC and the Sunshine Band bit where Daria quoted from that song they did...LOL), and it was tastefully done, too.

So, yeah, good story, liked the humorous moments too, keep up the good work!

When I got to the Pink Floyd song I started crying. Nuff said.

i liked it. i dig sad depressing stories. it made me think of my b/f and realize how much i love him and treasure every day that he is alive.

I'm glad most people enjoyed my story. I know it wasn't full of lots of raw emotion but just so everyone knows it's because I was trying way too hard to keep the character in..well..character. I was basically trying to stay true to the show and didn't want to change them too much. In my mind that's how these people would deal with this. But again this is just my opinion on how it would go down. And, sorry about the prom dress. I haven't read much other Daria fanfic and since I wore black(okay, and white) to the prom I figured why couldn't Daria too? And as for Jane's well, I just pictured her wearing red. But thanks for all the kind words and constructive criticism. That is exactly what I was looking for with this being my first fanfic and all.

This was very good -the dialogue was good and your story sad and interesting. Heer Heer.

Not bad, but not brilliant. I got the sense that you were trying to make this emotive, but I didn't really make me emotional, perhaps because the narrative was a little dry at times. As was pointed out, Daria's rection seems a bit off; she goes through the gamut of emotions fairly quickly.

Other than that characterisation was recognisable, at least, though what made me wonder was the end. You've written a story about loss, but the ending seems to tie everyone's grief up into a nice little package. It appears a little rushed to me. You also change tenses sometimes, which makes the story appear quite jarring. You don't "suck" by all means, but I didn't feel particularly drawn in. Granted, it's an individual criticism, but for a story to evoke emotions in me, I have to feel like I'm *there*, not like I'm reading a synopses.

The good point was that I liked how you didn't do a, "drunk drivers who killed Tom and raped Daria get the lethal injection" fic, à la Peter Guerin. I'm glad this wasn't too over-dramatised, and I definitely think you should continue writing. And kudos for not making Daria shack up with Trent.

One last thing: any more Daria fic mentions Jane wearing a red dress and Daria wearing a long black dress to the prom, and I shall scream loudly. ;)

ok, i read it and it was just perfect, i loved it. Wish you do another chapter, maybe more spicy, i dunno. Send a mail if you want, i'm from peru so i don't know how to speak english very , mail me, yeah? i really liked the story

Carla