Wow, excellent work. Sorry, but that's really all I can say... :)

Hah! What a great story-it shows that you've actually put a lot of thought and depth into the concept of the Matrix. I particularly like your answer for why humans as batteries, and of course, the jab at Microsoft. Good stuff.

Hey, thanks for reviewing my story.

I've read this one before, although I never reviewed it(I read it like a lllloooonnnnnggggg time ago).

Very nice, might I add.

Nothing wrong with it, everything's fine, wasn't too disturbing...the only thing I can think of to say that fits it is that...it was...smooth.

Everything flowed together, and made sense while doing it. Wasn't too complicated, because your reasons were believeable.

And in fact, this fic almost makes you think about the if Neo IS the realy "hero" in the movie.

I like your style of writing. I can't really describe it, but...I suppose that it's something along the lines of just "calm". You get your point across, but don't leave out the main cause of the story. I like that. Good work, wonderful peice.

Hey - I wasn't going to review this but I figured I hate it when ppl read my stuff and then don't review it - (not like I really find out about it, but, still) I also figured everyone hates those "It's good" reviews. SO - I didn't really get it in the first couple paras - but what can I say (I'm slow!) Your writing style suits your topic - somehow - don't ask me how that works - but it does. Good job!

I think this is very well written, with excellent detail and a great sense of a different point of view. The moral questions raised are intriguing, and I especially like the jab at Microsoft. ;) Please write more!