Truly awesome! Thank you VERY much!

Perfect story.

Your stories are really quite addictive. I cannot wait to read the next and last installment.

I think this is my favourite chapter in just about any story I have ever read. The emotion and depth of character you portray is heart rending. This is a phenomenal chapter, as is the story, and it's beautiful. I just had to tell you that.

just gets better and better...
bebe1984

You are evil. Really. You are probably as evil as you are talented but darn it you are evil!

How long has it been? Five months? Five months! Since you have posted the lastest in the Renewal series. Evil. Simply evil. *sigh*

Your stories are really good and I haven't read anything that's this good and love the stories, I hope you are going to continue with the third part of this story. please please please...i actually have read this story 3 times and still waiting for the third part!!

Hey, it's been almost a year now. Where is the third book. Please have it out soon. Great story by the way. I'm quite impressed. But Please get the next book out soon. i'm going crazy here.

Oh! That was super! I loved it! Please more! I can't wait for the next part! I was soso worried through this - that it might not be Darien after all who was her soul mate, but i did guess through the middle that he might become Elysion 'cause of the Crimson gold thing. Very Good Job!

I'm sure you've heard this many times but... gods, you're a genius! I spent a whole night reading both fics of this serie because I just could *not* stop... and, *please* write the next one soon?

great. simply great. i can't wait for part 3. it should be coming out soon, rite? after all, it's past x-mas time now. rite? onegai, get it out soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1) wow...if only notre dame could truly live....
2) wow...i gotta stop saying wow...but wow...the picture u made when u described reika and tranq and artemis was so awe-inspiring...wow....
3) hmmm...interesting...kian is kissing serena...darien better not find out...then kian would be so dead. poor guy.
4) interesting...she's in the realm of dreams...can't wait to find out wut it's like...must find out now! ja!

wow...the power you conveyed in the last paragraph was amazing...i wish i could write like this...maybe i'd actually get an A in AP Lit. oh well, you can't get everything you want.

you should include luna some more. i like it when she's intimidating ppl. *snicker snicker* wonderful. lol. i'm really enjoying this fic and i'm sorry it'll be over in a few more chapters. i really want you to get part 3 out soon!

mmmm...food. u kno, my 2 favorite words are both 4 letters long and begin with f. can you guess what they are? i bet u can guess what one of them is already. yup, food! hee hee. u can figure the other one out by yourself.

anywayz, i'm actually reading this in the afternoon! i'm not reading at midnight! wow! but i should get to the reviewing part. this was great! it was funny, which was great (darien should swear some more) and more of serena's emotions are shown and darien is becoming the leader he needs 2 b! wonderful! so much development. it's great! now i must go read the next chapter. can't wait!

1) ok, this is something dat i meant 2 mention in "the law keeper", but i guess i 4got. anywayz, jupiter doesn't hav any rings. saturn does, and i think neptune has about 10 of them...maybe it's uranus instead? well, it's one of the two. but jupiter definitely has no rings.

2) michiru has chesnut hair...right....

3) ah, the dumbstruck friends. always a good touch to any fic. *snicker*

4) hmmm...11:12pm...2 read or not 2 read...*debates for a half a second* to read! on to the next chapter!