LOL. I would like to show Hermione how much I love her story.

Awesome. It's just like it was made to be put in the book and it should be :)

Great story! I love Hermione so it's always fun to find a fanfic with her as the main character. You write so well, too! Keep up the great work!

I do love Hermione... that lovable neurotic over achieving Virgo that she is. I also love how you got into her head, it was a lovely little story.

Beautifully written. I love this little one shot insight into Hermione pre-Hogwarts.