To be honest, I'm suprised this oneshot hasn't got more reviews. It's really well done, and very cute. Loved the name for the baby as well. lol

Keep up the great work!

Well, that was different. Not different in a bad way, just that the story and its subject matter were completely unanticipated. Every once and a while I click on something just to check it out; when I'm lucky, the gamble pays off.

So, unusual, but interesting story. I liked that you kept it from Tien's perspective because I think you nailed his personality in his thoughts and reactions to the very weird situation he found himself in. Yamcha was excellently shown through his actions and I appreciate the fact that you didn't forget Pu'ar and Chaozu. The subject matter itself was the hardest to get into, and that is why Tien's perspective was such a good one. He got it, where Yamcha did not. His dry commentary about Shenron at the beginning was funny.

The ending was sweet. I have no complaints or critiques. The child will be well accepted in this particular universe. Very few of the canon characters could be considered 'normal'. Well done.