this was a good start to a great story!)how come you never finished this? i would have liked to read the rest...\

i know i say ALL your dtorys are awsome, but i i dont know not really feeling this one

really really sorry

that was good. i want to see if batman will take care of robin.

whats happening?

this is a really good story, write more. the plot line is very interesting and captivating. please get to the next chapter quick;y.

Are you going to update this?

Huh?

What's going to happen? Is it poison or something more sinister?

saver that you would leave after going into Chapter Three

I LUV it! But you had to make a clifty didn't you. do you feel no shame?

PLEASE finish this story. If you don't Im going to cry.

Ooh! I simply... LOVE IT! But update soon, ROBIN'S AGE DEPENDS ON IT! Well, it could...

please continue. i can't wait until chapter 3

Like, Okay!
Well, the first chapter was a little hard to read because of some technical problems, but it was still good from what I could make out. I would like to see more, so pls update soon!
Writing for HIS glory ALWAYS
Dante/TME/Brian/Isildri

please update!