OMG, this is perfect. It's detailed and sad and lovely. Just like your other works. You never disappoint, do you?

So sad!

That was sad but I have to say that you made me very happy because you used the word "shudder" correctly. You would be surprised by the number of stories I have read where people "shutter". I'd like to see that! It kind of drives me nuts but I try to not let it.

Wow, talk about misunderstandings...wish you would continue it someday. :)

Oooooooh noooooooooooooooo! I don't know what I expected by the title off the contest. Lol. I'm so stupid lol but that ending made me cry. I am all Edward/Bella and it was so sad but I guess it was supposed to be. Very well written. You are such a talented writer. Thank you

I know I'm coming late on this one. I have know idea how I missed this story. I thought I had read everything you've written! Anyway, I would love to see you take this one further. It wouldn't have to be long, just a few chapters. Poor Edward! I understand he left her because he loved her so much and wanted her to experience having a child since he was unable to give that to her. His intentions were noble but his actions sucked. I agree with Bella, that was a decision that should have been made together. You just have to give us an HEA for this. It's just unsettling knowing there is angst between these two somewhere in the universe. ;-). Love your work, always.

Damn it Bella! Leave the fucker and go back to Edward! You stupid bitch!

Awesome!

Like your take on the breakup. Edward really appears as the ass in this. Why would she even want to be with some controlling idiot like that. Just serves him right. Neither one is happy cause of his idiocy. But Jake? Really? Just NO!

('Nuff, you know I am totally EdwardxBella all the way!)

Please continue this. It is just cruel to leave them (and Us) at this point. We can wait until some of your other stories are finished, but please don't levae this like this!

Time can't fight fate was awesome. Please continue this story!

Oh Oh, so much pain, then a possible solution, then more questions and more pain

this is a big owie!

You should flesh out the details and finish it.

From where it is now, no one is going anywhere and there is more mis-information

Reb

Oh no you can't leave it like that. Please continue with this story, please. They have to get back together.

OMG! You made me cry at work! And I work with a bunch of guys, that doesn't help. I would def love to see some more from these two. That ending absolutely killed me. I hate to sound like a whiny HEA h00r, but I am so I can't help it. I loved it!

Loves

Lula

Really sad, but really good.