|Reviews for Otaku Four Skysaber's Choice|
| novaxe1 11/24/12 . chapter 11
I SO want to see how the goverments handle devil hunters. (though I am pretty sure the word harem will be involved) not to mention how grey will manage to reconcile Jared with queen serenity. THAT is truly a herculian labor, and that's just getting through to serenity!
| Seiju 3/26/11 . chapter 11
I thought it would take Nodoka san a bit more to reach that point actually. Oh well. This story is awesome.
| ranma hibiki 1/4/11 . chapter 11
*chuckles* i think id get out of the burning building (or any other dangerous situation) and THEN watch the acrobats of the elven studio crew..rather then the other way around
| Radio Driver 12/30/10 . chapter 11
Good goin, sky. Keep on keepin on.
| addicted2text 12/23/10 . chapter 11
Ah the perils of officious officialdom! Poor civil servants whose uncivil commands are ignored by a reality that cares not for any ideology...
Love how Jared just shutdown their demands. Not much else to say, since I read this chapter the first time(s) it was posted.
| Selias 12/23/10 . chapter 11
I can't help but wonder if this is a re-write, or if you're just putting up chapters of your old stories and . Either way, are you going to add new chapters after the ones that you've already written?
| addicted2text 11/24/10 . chapter 10
"Man, I wish I could get all of my powers back..." His eyes flew wider than his face "...and have everything working right, and keep all of the secrets I care about, not have anything result which I would find upsetting, deleterious..." in wide-eyed panic he began to cram in all of his exclusive phrases before the wish went off.
Am I right in thinking this is where the splitting of ranmas takes place in The Bet\Mirrors Multiplied?
| addicted2text 11/24/10 . chapter 9
Jared turned with a completely honest face to the person who believed she was his mother. "But mom, sisters *have* to be argued with. Otherwise, they're so beautiful and charming they'll never believe any of the boys at school are good enough for them. It is the unpleasant duty of a brother."
| addicted2text 11/24/10 . chapter 8
"Is she a youma?" Artemis asked. Hmm, there *did* seem to be something odd about that parasol. Such pretty colors, swirling in such lovely patterns, twirling and shifting...
| addicted2text 11/24/10 . chapter 7
"WOW!" Rini enthused. "Jay-kun, our mom will be so pleased!"
Rotary instrument, meet excrement.
| addicted2text 11/24/10 . chapter 6
The youma laughed, facing the Pheonix Mage. "This is a cram school. We want answers. What's 355x268?"
"95140, and your point being?"
Energy rushed from the pearl clad youth in a wave, crippling him in an instant. IDIOT! She's a teacher youma! By answering you admit to being a student. Student Teacher You're in her power!
Sometimes its a mistake to be good at EVERYTHING...
| addicted2text 11/24/10 . chapter 5
There was a cycle of life for all things, nations and businesses among them. It did no good to preserve them when they'd decayed and their time had come. Spend your efforts instead seeing to it that the replacement was better than what it replaced.
I wish the politicians at the United States Congress had had that understanding. Of course since they're past their own sell by date...
| addicted2text 11/24/10 . chapter 4
The small girl looked rapidly around herself. "Eeek!" She screamed, latching onto his head and wrapping her body around his face, completely obscuring his view. "I DON'T WANNA BE HERE!" She shrieked at the top of her lungs.
I love how you keep Rini true to reality here and have her react as a young girl would in real life. Also shouldn't the change of artifacts (from the crystal to the spellbook) be a hint to Jared that he had changed things enough to potentially be her father? I imagine it was the many new memories he still has to integrate that screwed him up there...
| addicted2text 11/24/10 . chapter 3
"After all," Jared nodded, concluding for him what the cat wasn't willing to say. "I'm not from the Silver Millennium."
The cat just nodded.
I get so sick of that trope. One of these days I'd love to see someone write a horror story about it using the girls transformations into their eternal forms and near destruction of earth needed to create crystal Tokyo as the moon kingdom's racists attempt at genocide, and its lack of trust to anything not of its kingdom. I'd set it up so Luna was in on it from the beginning and keeping Artemis from spilling the beans to the girls.
| addicted2text 11/24/10 . chapter 2
Suddenly the cat was in a girl's school dress and whispering to the side.
"Or at least that's what the gossip is, we hadn't gotten to talk very much." Mina finished, feeling very pleased as her parents moved back from suspicious to being sympathetic.
I love that you never quite forget that you're writing for a visual medium without being absurd about it by messing about with various textual and altered fonts, etc in attempt to add back the flavor of the original settings. It just comes naturally for you.