I love this so much. It REALLY REALLY reminds of me of Edgar Allen Poe poems.

Cryptic and beautiful.

*twitches a little* Creepy! But nicely written.

O_O *starts shivering, for this story reminds her of how her friend died...*

ooooo, dark fic, ne? It's phrased very nicely (unlike mine -_-) and Yes, i'm also a Neopian writer.

. . . wow. That was very angsty, but still very very good.

Whoah! That was COOL! It was so sad! Very well-written.

*Liaths looks depressed* I like silver... and that's what color my blood is...

That was sad, but good! you are REALLY talented.

That was so sad, I almost cried!

I don't like sad stories, but this was beautifully written. **sniff** Good for you...

Oh sheesh. Now listen to me. You are brilliant. You managed to creep the living crap outta me. This is simply magnificen!

Such an unhappy story...you know, you could submit this to the Neopian Times and it would most likely get right in.

Angst a go-go. Reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe, but with more colors...no wait. Masque of the Red Death. Okay, it reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe.

Oh my... that is so sad! The poor owner... ;_;

There has been a huge influx of talented writer's in the Neopets section lately...I've been checking it every visit to since it contained only 10 stories, and it has turned from a happy, sappy section to something that contains wonderful stories like this. I enjoy 'light' fictions on occasion, but now the Neopets section has some dark to balance it out. Wonderful work :-)