I liked how this story started to unfold. Personally, the attraction on Misakis end was a bit too fast but its okay. Anyways, this was actually a pairing I've been curious to see so I hope you continue this.

Though, there is one thing that bothers me and that was the whole reason why Nowaki and Hiroki broke up, since Hiroki really isn't as heartless as fanfiction writers make him out to be. He can be mean,but he has a completely different attitude towards Nowaki at least. He's not really nice when it comes to Nowaki, but he's nicer to Nowaki and he makes an attempt to make conversation with him.I mean, he's even openly said he loved him. ( I don't mean the library scene either) It just didn't sound like a Hiroki like thing to do.

I'm sorry, I wasn't really trying to criticise, just something I wanted to point 't get discouraged, though. Continue! :)

Omg, I want to see the next chapter real soon. I like this pair, and not only that they both have the same problem. If this was a romantica manga secret chapter, then please for everyone sake, continue on. I also enjoy author who have could write long chapter as well. Please continue to have the chapter longer for each new update.

But I wonder what r Akihiko and Hiroki doing?I can't believe Akihiko did that to Misaki?I don't think he means it.I wanna c Misaki and Nowaki kissing in front of them!(laughs evily)Its time for a revenge!

I loved this, I really did D I think these two make an adorable couple...though while Hiroki's situation sounds very Hiroki-like, Akihiko...wouldn't do that, I think, what with him having taken responsibility for Misaki, whose Takahiro's younger brother and everything, right...but it's fine though ) I'm glad this hasn't like totally bulldozed into yaoi territory like a lot of other fics and that it's slowly building up a little...great job! _

ok that was just too cute for words! i never thought i would like this pair but i love it! please write more!

I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!

One word: UPDATE.

I'm serious! Since I started to search for couples outside the cannon, there are two that I have been waiting for: ShinobuXMisaki and NowakiXMisaki. And now you've given me a, not just good, but great NowakiXMisaki! It's so amazing! And how you are doing not only about physical attraction, but also showing their relationship developing... UPDATE! I WANT MORE DAMN IT!

NOOOOOOOOOO! Misaki and Nowaki? Together?...oddly enough, they seem...adorable XD You're right. I don't think I've ever seen that pairing before and I like it (slapping myself in the face for saying that lol).

Can't wait for the next chapter. Please hurry!

Luluiscrazy

Broke my heart to actually read about Romantica and Egoist couple breaking up.. But Nowaki/Misaki sounded too tempting and I don't regret reading this. XD I'm looking forward for more! XD Great chapter!

I am so happy. While I love the original pairings, I have always wanted to read something with Nowaki & Misaki. I am very glad to find a multichaptered fic and one that looks promising. Great first chapter

IVE BEEN WAITING

FOREVER

man, im a freak when it comes to crack pairings and stuff and HirokixMisaki is probably like, my second fav pairing. Now i feel a tad sorry for Akihiko but man this is just great! And your writing skills are awesome! Please update as soon as possible!