|Reviews for Jack's Playroom: Outtakes from IWIPB|
| Moltz 5/2/13 . chapter 2
Beautifully written. Really like Jack-Dom-Guru. He sees solutions to emotional trauma in ways that bring common sense and closure together.
Emmett was spectacular.
| KScheermom 1/6/13 . chapter 2
Loved it! Exactly what Rose & Emmet needed! Great job!
| Rachel Garber 7/17/12 . chapter 2
This is very sweet, I forgot that it was not Izzy in these chapters and was very sweet to have Rose be able to let go of her deepest fears, her hard limits, very very nice
| Rachel Garber 7/17/12 . chapter 1
This was good, read it ages ago, can't wait for the next and hope to see some more, although maybe not the way things are going with Boyscout and Izzy.
| tee hill 5/26/11 . chapter 2
| Kats Flower Girls 5/4/11 . chapter 2
Hmm, you have Emmett be the Dom... I wouldn't have pictured it, just because of exactly what Emmett says, he doesn't want to bring back Rose's trauma, but Jacks answers makes sense and I ended up really embracing Rose as a sub!
I love the scene names that Emmett and Rosalie chose... I'm guessing Lily is short for her middle name, Lilian? Well, and bear is just self explanatory, LOL!
"I wish I didn't have to be so... strong all the time." I love this!
"You will want what I want, and I will give you what you need. Agreed, Lily?" ...hot damn *notices a drip of sweat starting to trickle down her spine*
"Lily, will you submit to me and allow me to bring you to the heights of ecstasy?" ...HELL YES! *makes mental note to grab a spare pair*
Several minutes later...
*still panting hard* The way that Bear brought back Lily's fears by playing music from her human life then using his vampire speed to mimic multiple men touching her, then the music changed to her angry mens voice's driving her to panic & when Bear gagged her I thought it would be too much!
But having the voices change to that of her family and of Edwards music was just beautiful & pure genius!
OK, I really, ReAlLy, REALLY LOVE Emmett as a Dom! And if I was Lily, Jack would be getting more then a Christmas card from me, LOL! He'd get the biggest Harry & Davids basket money could buy, tee hee hee!
| devildogbully 4/30/11 . chapter 1
Now that is just hot!
| Rebadams7 4/26/11 . chapter 2
Awesome and wonderful and healing. Go Bear!
| Siriusmunchkin 4/25/11 . chapter 2
Wow! That was totally awsome. Jack seems to know exactly what everyone needs. He was told about what happened to Rosalie and knew exactly how Emmett could be the Dom and take those bad memories away. And that happened. We know Rosalie's Christmas card list is very small and very exclusive, lol.
| Cierra Hill-Thomas 4/23/11 . chapter 2
I've always said that Jack was amazing and even though I've never done the whole dom and sub stuff he makes me think about trying it sometime. now this outtake was amazing, I just never knew tha Em had it in him to be so aggressive with Rose and the way that he handled himself was incredible. I think that the amount of love that he has for that woman is inspirational and I'm glad that he was able to help Rose over come her fears and replace them with ones that will last her entire lifetime.
| Katluva0323 4/22/11 . chapter 2
Wow. Didn't know Emmett had it in him! HA! Lovely little outtake here! Thanks for writing it! :D
| SandytheSandstorm 4/20/11 . chapter 2
Ok who is responsible for this messary - I LOVED IT. Edward not in it HARDLIMIT...run away...danger...danger. But I so loved it. I must say this has made me love Em. This was such a good idea, a great twist...Em, The Bear, dominating Rose, Lily - to take away her hidden fears she hides, but her family knows is there.
"I see," he answered thoughtfully. "Have you ever considered that perhaps in dominating her, you could give her new memories? Develop some sense of safety with you that will not remind her of the past?"
Love how he changed their play plans without telling her – the act of surprise was so vividly written. I loved how you detailed her every thought from when she got the letter from Alice to upon seeing him to... "Yes, Bear; I'm yours to command." I dropped to my knees before him and bowed my head in submission... for the first time in our relationship."
"You will want what I want, and I will give you what you need. Agreed, Lily?"
Loved how he asked her first as he saw her confusion and fear at the onset "Do you trust me, Rose?" The question caught me off guard. Weren't we Lily and Bear in this scene? And how was it he spoke before me, when I was the one in charge? Or was I?"I asked you a question! Do you trust me? Because if not, you can turn around right now and leave, and we can forget we ever started this." Which was sexy as hell btw, yeah it was. Then he ask her a second time before she answers him using their play name. Very symbolical of "I remind you of who I am to ensure you trust me as Em, then as Bear"
Enjoyed it...as always enjoyed Jack, still see the guy I told you about Sarita as Jack.
| Isabel Masen 4/20/11 . chapter 2
what an exciting outtake! Sweet, Hot & Sexy! I love it
| edf-k 4/20/11 . chapter 2
Chuckling out loud at the last sentence, while at work, starting to get strange looks but I loved this 'playroom' outtake. Such growth potential for them both. I'm liking Jack more and more and wondering myself what kind of vamp he'd be.
| KNG1986 4/20/11 . chapter 2
Rose's trust in Emmett is amazing as is your trust in TwilightGuru09 in writing an outtake for your story. It was trust well placed. Emmett was great but being inside Rose's head that way was much better than I expected.
So my birthday is next month. Could you please send Jack to my house?