i can appreciate the story and general flow of this m.e. fanfic, but i find the action scenes choppy and rather redundantly typed. most of them could go a little smoother, but all in all i like the story.

awesome chapter,
The song Rebirthing works great with the battle scene up to when John wake up in the hospital

Awww... that last part... it was so beautiful... I'm starting to cry! I'm sad everyone lost so much (Like in ME3) but I'm so happy others got their happy endings (unlike Shepard who has to die for any worthwhile ending!) I fell this was a good improvement and change for the trilogy and would in fact have preferred something like this.

I'm a new follower. Loved the opening of this story.

I put off writing a review because the review count was at 333 and I didn't want to fuck it up... but I'm enjoying the story too much to care.
Now hopefully my like-minded readers will feel free to review without harming their precious equinox.

Much love,
Paragon

This story is fuckin awesome

The name's Chuck Shepard... middle name Norris.

just wanted to let you know someone is stealing this story from you he named it (from another world) all he changed was the races and he made it a ashley romance instead he even left in a artican refrence by accident his name is EclipsePheniox

OMG where is this going I'm so excited!

- K

this story is awesome!

This story was okay it wasn't great and it wasn't terrible but it shows you have potential as an author

Nice story. Pretty complete. Science was a little off but that is to be expected. Nice job.

Just read chapter 34
Shepard and Nihlus seem pretty tight now.
I just hope someone remembers to feed Garrus.

with the new ME3 DLC, that means that the Oracle is a lethiathan (i know that nit the case but im just saying it)

I tried to like it but Shepard is a big honking Gary Sue, and his race was so perfect but got wiped out by zombies!

And Tali cannot stand her anymore, she spent so much time boinking the commander and being rescued I though I was reading a fairy tale.

Shepard just made me sick, I should have stopped when a five year old was supreme commander, it kinda reminded me of HP fanfics where he knows everything and is related to every god/hero in the universe and you end up rooting for someone to shoot him in the face.

Nice try, but after reading fifty chapters of gary sue, I need a strong drink.