this is really good more more

This is really good please continue!

YAY! An Offspring fanfic! :)

This is a really good start!

Please continue :)

Finally! Someone has written an Offspring fanfic! This was excellent, I love the story and the style of writing and how you used Nina's "narrating' style! You've inspired me to write an Offspring fanfic myself this summer. Thanks for a great read and please write more! xx

Interesting start. You've gotten straight to the point, which is good.

Looking forward to more

i'm really looking forward to how this story progresses, sounds very much like something that would happen in the show.

I am just glad I found someone writing about this great show, I've been meaning to write something down but have never got around to it, although you have inspired me to put my thoughts into writing :D

YAY for Offspring! I love it!

Heeey! This is great!

It's good someone finally wrote an Offspring fanfic!

Poor Nina :( I hope her recovery won't be too painful. Actually, I could see this happening in the show: yet another obstacle for her and Chris to jump.

I just finished watching Offspring actually! How great was it? I'm so happy about Nina and Chris! Squeee!

Please update this soon :)

Alexandra