very cute

you utter bastard! you made me go "d'aww" at the end! and i never go "d'aww"! NEVER!

but other than that, good job!

to make up the fact you made me go "d'aww" (you utter bastard!) i demand you update this fic as soon as humanly possible! so i may read more of this most excellent fic!

good chapter, byes

That was really nice there, and enjoyed the talk Harry and Xander had, as well as how he and Hermione were able to have a really nice night, and hoping that from this onward, the two of them will be able to better face the next challenges thrown at them.

good

You know its true love when she stops kicking you in bed.

lol. I love how so many btvs fans seem to realize how In love with Willow Buffy was and is and yet it was never really explored in canon. Despite everything. Despite how in season 8 comics Willow and Buffy have a weird unique thing where Willow shares her power with Buffy and she gets glowy green magic swords that kick ass, but apparently just for one fight and that amazing combination of the two biggest powerhouses on the side of the good guys seem to forget how well they fight together and never seem to do it again. Eh...I'm just ranting about how Wuffy could have made the series amazing in season 7. But no...Willow hooks up with the pushy, aggressive, spoiled, arrogant brat who thought she knew better than a slayer with 8 years of experience and 7 years of experience protecting the hellmouth and who had defeated everything she ever went up against. She dis so with the help of the scoobies, which the scoobies then forget about and decide to abandon her despite everything they've been through, because Xander lost an eye(which is just so much worse than everything Buffy's sacrificed for everyone over the years) and because a pushy potential thinks Buffy's a self-righteous bitch because she wasn't coddling everyone. And Willow turns on Buffy and that's what causes the completely heartbroken expression. And then Buffy is left with only the vampire that had previously attempted to rape her as comfort, at night in a nearly abandoned town with possible uber-vamps, bringers, and caleb running about. None of that seems right...or in character for them. Then season 8's Willow admitting to somewhat blaming Buffy for Tara's death and avoiding her with Kennedy because of it... Well fuck that. Willow's the one who was so adamant to bring Buffy back. Buffy was just minding her own business when warren showed up and shot her and then a stray bullet hit Tara, who was only there because of the recent reuniting they'd had because WILLOW's magic addiction drove them apart. So really it was Willow's fault, two-fold. Had she not brought Buffy back she would not have fallen so far into dark magic and become an addict which drove Tara away. Buffy wouldn't have been around to annoy the wanabe supervillains, and there would have been no need for the reconciliation with Tara which left standing where she was to get shot. So it all traces back to Willow's inability to let Buffy remain dead. Which can also be seen as more Wuffy evidence. Anyways I've begun to rant and I should stop. Good day to you and I'm looking forward to more of this wonderful story.

Very sweet chapter.

amusing as heck

I'm in total agreement with Dawn and Xander's reaction to polyjuiced Hermione and Harry porn. Nobody needs to see images of their underaged children in THAT context. Even if you know it's not really them.

Good to see Dawn and Xander won't put up with someone taking advantage of Harry and Hermione there, and can't wait to see what happens next as it gets closer for time to start school again.

excellent

lol awesome chapter

update soon please

Hilarious as ever. Keep it coming.

this is strangle a very good original story