If this has nothing to do with Before I Fall why did you put it here? There are other places you could have added it you know...

Why did you put this under this category? It has nothing to do with 'Before I Fall'. Were you just looking for somewhere to stick this?

I believe you should write a continuation to this story. It is very good but I dont like that it leaves you hanging :)

This was the most well written story i've read since Impulse by Ellen Hopkins! I think you should read her stories. Also, before you publish this, make sure to re-read it fix your mistakes! KEEP WRITING!