Ahh I love this story. Awesome work, can't wait for the next chapter! :)

What. What. What.

When I saw that this fic didn't have "Incomplete" or "Complete" at the top, it didn't mean much. This fic was from 2003, probably before that detail was implemented. I assumed it was finished, which was an exciting thought after a few minutes reading and learning what an amazing and well-written story this was. And now I am here at chapter 19/20, and there are NO more chapters, and the story is FAR from finished... and I am very unhappy.

Seeing since this was last updated about 6 years ago, I guess hoping for a very belated update would just be kidding myself... but please, for the love of god, resume, keep writing, move on with this story. If I walked out right now and got hit by a truck and lost all my senses and limbs and had to get giraffe organ implants to keep me alive, I wouldn't be able to rest in peace until I had read the end of this story.

Keep on going!

I'd glad I found this story. So far it's excellent.

Also: "So it could be a really ugly and old one but just pretend it’s really cool."

Made me laugh, hee.

plz? can u plz update? this is rlly good and...i just wanna c squall and seifer work out their problems! can u plz update?

Just realized it hasn't been updated in a long time... *tears* You're not going to leave Squall like that, right? right? right?

Oh well. I hope you continue it. If not... it was a great read.

Hi! I just wanted to say that I added you to my favs (both author and story) and I should at least review once.

I suddently got hit with a FF fiction bug and found this place through lj... and I am so amazingly glad I did. You're an awesome writer and this story was great. It totally pulls the reader in and I found myself submerged into your plot. The characters and setting are believable and *le sigh* I just love it. Yah. I like how Zell and Selphie are mad scientists and how Quistis is a photographer. I like Fujin's friendship with Squall and... yah.

Review on this chapter... Yay Seifer for taking Irvine's suggestion to be a bit more suave. Hope you write more soon!

OMG! Poor Squall! (Gasps!) I feel so sorry for him! Nice writing style and charecterization! Nice job!

wow, that is SO evil to leave readers off at that! T.T please update! this is great

hello! anyone there? UPDATE!

This is probably the only AU story I've ever liked. And you haven't updated in, like two years. I hope you do finish this story; I'll be looking forward to it.

So after reading 20 chapters of what is actually a *good* AU in the "The-characters-are-living-in-the-Real-World" sort-of way I'm wondering if you are going to finish it.

I hope you will.

Hey, I have reread this fic a few times, and I just thought I'd review. Apart from a major need to update it, it is really good. You've done really well keeping the character within the personality boundries, no switching personalities going on, it is all believable. The detail is good too, you seem to know what you're talking about, its really very good. I think maybe you should try to Have a little bit more info about how they are feeling. We call them 'locker room scenes' where you bascally have a large bit about how everyone was feeling, what they were thinking, not just Squall. Because not everyone talks to themselves, but their consciences may have something to say, for example, if Squall was trying to convince himself that nothing happened, then you could have a mini 'inner dialogue' where he may argue vocally against his conscience. That may be pretty effective. You dont have to, its just an idea. Anyway, Bye! Get in touch when the next chapter comes up please!

Conneticut is a really good fanfiction, I just wish that you'd update it! Also, the pages could do with extending. Please get back to me when you decide to continue!

Hey, are you going to update soon at all?

Or have you kinda stopped the fic? I was just curious. It was very well written and good. Hope you do continue it.

Wow... you updated since I last read... O_o;; I'm still kinda curious as to where this is all leading, and I'm telling you right now I wouldn't mind to see Seifer beat the living shit out of Keith with Squall watching, but that could be just me.

I still enjoy this fic a lot (had it saved on my computer for two years...), and hope you can start to update a little more frequently.