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Kitsune6
2007-12-15
ch 1,
abuseAt first I thought "Zoids crossover? Retarded." Then I sAw Kuno as Harry. That cracked me up. You win. =)
Vampwriter
2007-08-01
ch 1,
abusePlease come back to this. It's really good.
Karuma Kinsei
2007-02-27
ch 1,
abuseShampoo would pilot a great saber, a cat built for power. Just fits that remove all obstacles idea.
Otritzi
2006-12-28
ch 1,
abuseI want to see this fic continued. It looks real interesting. I agree, magic isn't out of place...but that tome reminds me of a stereotypical spellbook, it would be too klunky to have in the technological age of the zoids, Ranma should be translating it and putting it into a laptop computer or something. I like the idea of magic being used in a Zoid battle...think of all the interesting side effects it could have on the Zoids, who are technology...which doesn't meld all that well with magic. Wait a sec...that could be how Ranko got her personality!

Keep the chapters coming, and you'll make me a very satified reader.
griffenvamp
2006-09-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseever going to do anthing with this story
Hiryo
2006-07-10
ch 1,
abuseI like it and hope that Nabiki and 'Ranko' (in human form) learn
to accept each other. ;)

I previously red that fanfic already somewhere and already then
I wanted to have this story continued. So will you continue it
in the near future?

Furthermore, would you honor me with 'rating yourself' on my
homepage which you can find through my profile here on
There in the 'Contact me'-section a little bit down you can
rate yourself.
Yami no Hi
2006-05-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery nice. When u gonna update? I want to know what happens next
shinji the good sharer
2005-10-26
ch 1,
abusewell... Shampoo could pull off a hellcat or maybe a Rev-raptor. Mousse would be a Sand Stingray hands down. Ling-ling and Lung-lung would probably be twin Zabats.

ikari shinji
Amenita Virosa
2005-08-09
ch 1,
abusewhen r u up-dating this?
Innortal
2005-04-09
ch 1,
abuseGreat job with the fusion, I almost want to make my own story after reading this one. I can just see Ranko taking off and giving Akane a thrill ride for sneaking into her, and the shape changing spell giving us our favorite aquatransexual. Have you decided what Zoid to put Ryoga in?

Keep writing.

Innortal
Gundum M
2005-02-13
ch 1,
abusegood story. My first instinct about shamppo says hell-cat.
Rain Urameshi
2004-10-31
ch 1,
abuseHey, this is pretty good
Sora: What's a zoid?
Bit(walks in with Ranma, Riku, and Sephiroth: Did I just hear right?
Ranma: Why a c-c-cat type zoid? I hate cats!
Riku: Sora, why are you asking a stupid question?
Sora: But, I DON'T know what a zoid is!
Bit: It's an anima-shaped mecha.
Sora: What's a mecha?
(group facefault)
Ranma: Ranko?
yeah?
Ranma: We gotta borrow Endless Waltz from that friend of yours again.
-_-;...yeah, you're right.
Riku: Cool
Sephiroth: I'm leaving. I don't want to watch that again.
Well, great chapter. I hope you post the next one soon.
Son of the Kyuubi no Kitsun...
2004-08-07
ch 1,
abuseyo this is way past cool i can't wait for the next chaper
later silent thunder
Viper
2004-05-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseI have to bring a mistake regarding Ranko's description to light. I have noticed that you say she is a Lightning Saix, which is not by any means a panther type Zoid, like the EZ-023 Hellcat. The Saix is based on a cheetah and is built for speed, not stealth. (On the other hand, she has been customized, so I'm not disputing the stealth shield.)
Tamphis
2002-12-24
ch 1,
abuseCan I make a suggestion?
Instead of keeping this just a one-shot bet-fic, make it a regular fic. And add a second chapter, why don't ya??

Anyway, keep up the good work! Ja ne!
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