Make more pls

u did an asowme job terrific job well done

Ugh, I really wish you would put this through a spell check or at least use Microsoft to type. There are plenty of grammer mistakes to be fixed.

Without all the English issues, this story just seems a little mediocre. It doesn't seem to be going anywhere special, and has a plethora of flat characters that all act nearly the same. Try to flesh it out a little before continuing, and please, check you’re spell and grammar more closely.

i loved the first and i love this chapter to i cant wait for the next and the sequel :P Ja Ne

Squee! I'm so glad that you continued this. Now about Ash and Sakura's battle.. that would make it more interesting..

Hopefully my thoughts on Sasori when he reveals his true job will come true. Update soon.

I enjoyed this one shot so much.. Even though I discovered it a little late. Lol

awesomeness

love this story so much you should make a sequal to what happnes to sakura and choroneko

yay she got to know how it is to have a family

haha if sakura would be a pokemon trainer she would pwnd 'em all x3

Will Ash be in the sequel?

I loove it and Sakura is soo lucky she had a legendary Pokemon ever.

WOW! i prequel to your story and i really love it and enjoy it! aww poor little sakura she is a orphan and no one wanted her! but i am extremely happy she now is apart of maylene's family and she has a pokemon from the isshu region! i also loved the fact that she was frinds with 2 legendarys and wild pokemon! the plot is magnificent and i am excited about the story coming out! may you please try your best to update and continue really soon D!

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