I like your style. It's far from mature, but it's light and entertaining. I'm going for more.

"This form of entertainment is highly illogical." He-he. This is so funny.

G.S.1307

Awesome story! Woo-hoo! hehehe, I'd love to see the Ferengi on Earth in the year 1947! hehehe.

-Erin

Not bad

I liked the story! Very cute. Felt bad for Naomi when she had to say goodbye to Grethor. Cute twilight zoney kind of story.