omffggg :(

so fckin awesome. deserves more reviews !

While the story line for this story is exceptional, I really do wish you would correct your grammar. I'll wait for the next installment nevertheless.

yay! another update! been w8ing 'patiently' haha, i love love love the chap, as always and hope to read the next one soon

Oh wow... This is...

I don't think intense is a good enough word to describe this chapter. This is amazing.

I am not trying to be mean, but this story needs a lot of work. For one thing, Rachel and Quinn have very different ways of speaking and in this story they both speak the same way that doesn't fit either of them. Rachel is long winded and full of high diction. Quinn is snarky and tends to use simple words, though she is not unintelligent by any means.

There is a difference between to, too, and two. I have noticed you use too a lot when it should be to. Too is something used instead of saying, "as well." So try to think of that!

Alsooo, you seem to only use than and never then when it is applicable. They are different words.

I have noticed a lot of the dialogue is awkward, as well. Not many people say, "I know this." When you introduced Henry, I almost thought he was a foreigner because of his, ever so slightly, broken english. Then I realized that you see it through out the fic, are you from somewhere else? It is very admirable to write a fic in a second language!

One last thing. There doesn't seem to be a plot? Other than Rachel having this crippling depression that doesn't seem to have a strong origin. Honestly, everything she has gone through isn't enough of an explanation. Are you going to introduce something else that happened in the past? Because if not, she seems to be acting overly dramatic.

So glad this story is not over. Good chapter. I look forward to the next updated.

Oh gooood. I want more please.

Hope you update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

I am really enjoying your story, but I hope that you will have Rachel moving out of her deep depression soon.

Awww man, so sad! Loved the update!

Well that was a bit cruel.

This story is really good, even if its kinda uncomfortable to read. You definately tap into the bottomless, swirly pit of depression in a very visceral way. I'm really glad I decided to read it, thanks for writing.

Wait...what? reads all again...I'm sad... I don't like sad Rachel, make us (fine they) happy?

Thanks for the chapter.

Depression is a hard and difficult subject.