I really hope you don't continue this stroy. It is very well written by sickening at the same time. Even though this is fic, it's not very realistic. No hospital has the right to refuse service and for Bella to sell herself to prevent paying a bill is disgusting at best. Talk about out of character. Who would read this if the characters weren't Edward/Bella? That's my review, I didn't mean to offend.

Well, isn't Carlisle just a nasty little doctor?!

This... Oh gosh. I don't even know what to say. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. I do hope though, that you continue. Please, please don't just leave it here. This is too good to be left at a one-shot. Whatever you decide to do, know that I (and lots of others, no doubt) have you on the alerts! :) :)

U like to frustrate us, right? All your stories finish with cliff... your are so mean ;-) same question do you plan this to be continued?

Really should continue this. Wow!

Well done!

oh I just read you other fic finding myself, and started to read other of your works. This one looks very promising, you should continue ;)

Awesome story! Yeah, I'd like to see it expanded some day, too!

I liked the story it was very intresting. I wish I knew what would happen next

Wow - so much ugliness but very well told.

ohhh man

that was intense

i hope bella forgived him

Really enjoyed this one, too. Can't wait to see how things turn out.

That's terrible! I look forward to you expanding this!

This was great! I love the plot! I'll be waiting for the next chapte. Please update soon. :)

Awe poor Bella! You go Edward