This is one of the better stories ive read so far. It touches and corrects a lot of the problems in canon such as the repair robots, spare parts, supplies, etc. The only thing the Ancients might have brought at the time of their arrival on Destiny would have been food and any updates for software or tech and I questions the food deal. They would have brought but enough until they got their own sources going. Destiny would have to be completely self sufficient something that so far im not seeing on the show except for energy production. The series Destiny seems more like a long range science ship than what Destiny would have to be and that is a generational colony ship because eventually it would become hard for even the Ancients to dial hell its at that point now and its already impossible for Destiny to dial Earth meaning no one could go home. Destiny would have to have facilities on board for fixing the ship, complete manufacturing capabilities for building new shuttles, large ship parts, personal items, etc. It would need mining capabilities unless it has energy to matter converter but the power requirments for that would huge, a part here or there is one thing but everthing

Epic read.:)

This chapter was great, lockpick in Kiva's tooth...i dunno. But great story none the less. Thanks for sharing, I look forward to your updates.

Interesting. :)

Love it! Epic read!

Epic!

Epic!

Not sure if I've commented before, but just wanted to let you know I've enjoyed reading your story. Keep up the good work!

Epic!

Uh oh... we're about to find out the truth... aren't we...

I was going to say... what happened there - even with the warning, they all died! But that makes sense now...

Nicely done.

lol, I loved how she threatened Matt at the end. Update soon!

I think Chloe will be okay now... Claire's dealt with Matt!

Love it!