This is food for imagination. There are a million ways you can imagine the battle and the emotions. It is sad, but well done.

Very well written. Though the lyrics are usually in italics while the fic is in normal writing.

I don't GET the ending! What happened? I realize that Voldemort was destroyed, but what happened to everyone? I love the poem you used, though! It's really gorgeous, and dark, and VERY poignant...

..you kinda lost me at the ending but the rest of it was so nice i really liked it.

Awwww, that was so sad! Me likes!

I like this. I could here it being read by someone with a really deep dramatic voice with some really intense music in the background. Something like Dual of the Fates from Star Wars: Episode One The Phantom Menace.

Wow! That was powerful... And unusual... Sounds like something I'd write *grins*... I liked the ending, though, I would of preferred something a little more, um, morbid and dramatic - sounds awful, but typically I'd have one of my mains in so much pain and torture with the others dying... Hmmm, otherwise, I'd have lots of fluff, but thats another story, and I've blabbed for long enough... Anyway, I really liked this! Well done! Great work!