I really appreciate that your grammar is good and that you know how to spell. It makes reading a lot easier and more enjoyable when I'm not trying to correct every little thing in my head. I really like the way you write your eclare stories. This one was nice: I liked imagining something different from cannon where eclare was working.

i thought it was hot personally, but it definatly did not suck, so dont second guess yourself

Aww this was cute:)

It's cute atleast you didn't describe what was happening

I luv this but u should make a long story like one on her 16th BDAY And wen they were in his car like a 10-20 chapters long

Hey I lived Ur storry I really lived it ;)

luved it keep it commin

Oh my god.

You're seriously my favorite author on Fanfiction right now, or damn near close to it. I absolutely LOVED 'Taking the Plunge', and seeing something new out by you MADE MY DAY.

This was everything an Eclare fic should be- Short, Sweet, and Sexy. I loved every word, and I just... ABCDEFQ, I LOVE your writing.

/therearenowords.

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I liked it. Were you thinking of continuing? I would love to read more... :)

OMG You write great!

i love it plesae make more with sex and her geting pregant but eli stays with her

i like it! it was SO Eli, lol, really IC

D'awwh. :) i love it!

I LOVED it. :)