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BunBun-Zarkelador
2009-11-11 . chapter 17
OMG I love this story so much! I stayed up really late to finish reading it ^.^; hope you update it soon!
Seiramel
2009-07-07 . chapter 17
This is a spectacular story. I love the plot! It's interesting that Tohru is famous and appears on television, magazines, etc. Glad to say that this is one of my favorite fanfictions.

I found spelling errors here and there, but I understood what you meant to put.

I love how you describe everything so well and how the chapters are so long! I've written a fanfiction before and the whole text was the amount of only one chapter of yours! Your writing is magnificently long I say. XD There's absolutely nothing wrong with that.

While I was reading, I had giggled a few times, but I wouldn't consider much of this focusing on the comedy category, but this definitely belongs to drama. It wouldn't hurt to put some romance in. The characters seem to blush a lot! I don't usually read fanfictions without it, but I'm glad I came across this fanfiction.

Romance attracts readers... well hopefully I'm not the only one. XD That would be nice if Kyo (KYORU FTW), Yuki OR Sho had feelings for her. *wink wink*

I think the only problem is that you. Need. To. UPDATE. Sorry If I sound irritating, but please do. It would be more than wonderful if you'd update, because I'd like to read what's going to happen next. Also, your fans of this story would like to read more. ;D I understand that you are a busy person, but I don't think that writing a few bits of the next chapter won't take up too much of your time, with it? O:)

Please update soon when you have the chance to! I'll surely be waiting! ^^
staid waters
2009-04-29 . chapter 17
Oh, this is wonderful! What an amazing story idea, and you handled it so well! I keep giggling, but it's not really a comedy, Tohru is just so incrediably cute...
Thanks!
Foxtale3
2009-02-11 . chapter 2
This story is so amazing! Not to be an annoying reviewer, but please, please, please update soon! I keep checking back for an update, and there never is one. :( Of course, this is coming from someone who has 4 on-going stories (on my comp, not posted) and can't finish any of them so... I totally understand how things get it the way! Just wanted to let you know that your stories are loved and appreciated!
Foxtale3
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
I just wanted to say that this story is amazing! Your characterization is dead on, and I love that Tooru doesn't actually want to become a teen idol. Her first photo shoot, the Suitcase Travels filming, the movie premier... I love them all! It was so hilarious that I actually stayed up all night reading this story. Literally. I also love your story Discoveries, and can't wait to read more of your work!
Wings of the Night
2008-11-17 . chapter 17
XD loved it! It's funny, in character, and a good bit of drama without making it too dramatic. I look forward to your next chapter!
Just me!
2008-11-16 . chapter 16
Hello there! I've been following Spotted! for years now and wanted to let you know how wonderful it is to come back and read your new instalments. You know these characters inside and out, how they would respond to different situations, their imperfections and their strengths. It's just like reading tha manga by Natsuki! Thank you for keeping Tohru just the same... and I have to say that my favourite line in this was: "Just a minute Honda-san." Yuki said blandly. "Let me remove this idiot from the universe so he doesn't pollute it any further."

Gave me a good old chuckle! Looking forward to more chapters, take as much time as needed to let your characters and storyline speak.
greengrouch
2008-11-01 . chapter 2
Ah, I just love your stories! This one sounds good, too. That scout is so persistent and to use that detail about Tohru as blackmail...dun, dun, dun. :D
CPAnthoni
2008-10-10 . chapter 17
I just love this story so much. Can't wait to read more.
Crystal Kira
2008-08-22 . chapter 1
I adore this story! It's wonderful, it has the right twists in the plot and puts humor in the right places! And even better, everyone's in character!
This is definitely a unique story tailored to match all the character's personalities.
Hope you update soon! Love da story!
GummiLover
2008-08-19 . chapter 17
aww poor tohru...
and its cute how the others worry for tohru..
i cant wait till you update...
^_^
slk1229
2008-08-08 . chapter 17
Great story!! Please update soon!
LibraryLady08
2008-07-18 . chapter 13
I love to read this story. Every time I finish this chapter I am just in tears. You are able to write so well that it bring out such emotion in myself, the reader. My compassion for Tooru and the Sohmas is so strong after I read this story. I love all of your writings but this story is probably my all time favorite fanfic! I hope you will continue to add to it in the future. :)
Fan
2008-06-22 . chapter 8
This fic is amazingly written out, I love the plot and the unique characters! However, there is one thing I'd like to add. Tohru's name is spelled "Tohru", not "Tooru."
Otherwise, I love your story, keep up the great work!
reibunny
2008-06-19 . chapter 17
YOU'RE BACK! I MISSED YOU!! Thanks so much for posting again. I love your long chapters, well worth the wait. And I loved the ending on this one. Kyon chan is SO cute!

Anyway, get well soon okay?

And don't feel bad for taking your time. Day jobs pay the bills and are part of being a grown up.

I'd rather slow but good chapters from a grown up than that rapidly updated, fast paced fluff from bored fifteen year olds that's so common on sites like these.

Theres a REASON we love you. You're a rockin' writer! Keep it up!
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