Awww! Yay! Sweet and wonderful and etc. Frankly everything wrapped pretty much how I expected it to, and I would have been disappointed if it had ended any other way.
Also, this popped into my head last chapter or two chapters ago, or something... What's with Scotty sleeping on the floor in Jim's room? That seems really random and I was just wondering why you chose to arrange it that way (not just once, but at least three times in the fic that I can think of).
Anyways... um... yeah... It was great _ Can't wait to read more of your work

It's clear that you put a lot of thought into this. AU's are tricky bastards and more often than not, they feel somewhat forced. But this is so seamless. Everyone has fallen into place so nicely here. I hope more people have praised that particular part of your writing.
Having said that... OMG CHULU! That is all.
Except, no it's not. Damnit, everything Pavel does is adorable in this fic! I cracked up at the part where he had claimed everyone's unborn children in games of Monopoly. (yes that was several chapters ago... but I try to drop reviews only when I have at least a couple semi-meaningful things to say)
I'm kind of missing Scotty though. He was being so awesome earlier with the fixing of everything.

Hooray, more Chulu! I was starting to feel a little deprived! You went, what, 3 chapters without any Chulu? *gasp!* But there was Chulu and all is well again!
Also, the fact that Chekov would win everyone's souls in Monopoly is too delightful for words. Not just all the money in the bank, but their souls as well. It's the little details that make this story so funny and wonderful.

Let's see... first, I loved the quote at the beginning of this chapter! It was wonderful and so completely appropriate for Spock and Kirk.
Second, I was more than a little delighted with the whole meta "I'm gonna talk about fanfics IN my fanfic" bit that you did. _
Third, I cannot get over the line about Pavel being too busy being in Hikaru's pants to be in anyone's pocket. That was simultaneously hilarious and adorable. Wait, was that this chapter or the last chapter? I can't remember... Curse my illogical and disorganized brain!
Anyways, this fic continues to be wonderful and I shall continue to read (to the detriment of all my other obligations... oh well).

Oh...my...god! Yay for Chulu! I got so happy when I realized you were going to include Chulu! My favorite Star Trek pairing, yet there are just not enough truly good Chulu fics out there. There are probably a bunch like this one where the Chulu is not mentioned in the description... this is a shame. Anyways, if we gave stars for fanfics, I would add a whole extra star just for adorable Chulu moments from this chapter! I'm hoping there will be more in later chapters _

Wow... I've only read one chapter and I'm already incredibly entertained.
For some reason, when I read the exchange between Kirk and Bones about how Bones wanted to marry Nyota... all I could think of was Sherlock Holmes. So if Kirk is Holmes, and Bones is Watson... then Nyota must be the chick Watson marries... So is Spock actually Irene Adler? Or Professor Moriarity... And why am I so caught up in this random idea when I should be continuing to enjoy this fic? How odd...

oh, my ...gosh! When I started reading this, I just couldn't stop. I barely stopped to eat and sleep. I LOVED this story. Definitely one of my favorites. Thank you for writing it and posting it. I truly hope that you write another AU with Spock and Kirk, like this one, again.

I read this a while ago and I still remember how awesome it was. Now that I have this account, I just had to put it in my favorites. Thank you for the amazing work :)

Did you hear that contented sigh? That's the sound of me finishing this story again. I pretty much just love the hell out of this story. ;) It gives me story ideas, but I'm way the hell too ADD to ever write them. So, that means I have to wait for more from you. ;)

Happy Holidays, Merry Christmas, Happy Festivus, etc. ;)

Oh my God, this story has been beautiful! Now is one of my favorites!

Indeed, it is written differently, but beautiful.

I loved the way you described everything from the solitude of Jim to his way of fighting.

Thanks so much for writing this, you really are a genius

I just finished reading your story and I was completely wrapped up in it from the beginning. That sounds strange but it's the only way to describe it.

I loved how Nyota and Bones were a pair, and a very fine looking pair at that! Plus it was gratifying to read Spock's reaction to Jim's job because it took time for him to make any decisions based on the new knowledge, that made it more believable.

Thank you for writing this story and I look forward to reading more of your work! :)

Oh, this is so quietly epic.

Wow, this is so refreshing for Star Trek :) There's so much clean dialogue, it's fast and sweet ;)

Really adorable AU - I loved all of the characters and the missions and things :)

Looking forward to that sequel bit :)

I finally finished (way to late). I loved the mission and how Spock learned about Jim's profession. It really isn't something you can understand until you experience it. Now off to read the steamy bits xD