Eeee this story is so good u great update! Leaves me desperate for another chapter (as always), yay for the kiss, been waiting on him making a proper move for months! :D

By the way, are we going to see Edgar again anytime soon?

( and thanks for letting me know you updated on dA!)

Please update soon! X

Omg this is the best chapter yet! Well worth the wait, and the gloves idea is brilliant! Your story is simply amazing, I'm proud to have followed it from the start and excited to continue doing so!

I love this chapter! Plot twists, finally. :) You have good grammar. However, I'm not sure if it's "Dr H Bloor." Shouldn't it be "Dr. Bloor?" Can't wait until chapter 16!

I love the story so far and I think you are really good at writing them. I still want to know what the whole thing about the silver box with the peanuts in is all about! :)

:O oh noooooooooooo! Update soon please thisnisnso good!

Wow - this is so so so good :D I love the Charlie Bone series and you write just like Jenny Nimmo which is a good thing when it comes to writing fanfiction, as usually you're supposed to sound like the author. This is addicting and very interesting! Keep it up and update SOON! SkyWriter2012

Awwwwwww. I ship Femory. I really love your story, but may I ask why the Bloors allowed her to stay at Gabriel's house? I mean, they seemed pretty upset, but they didn't go and take her away or anything.

That was a rather short chapter.

well done

Yay but I'd always stick w/this story
Merry (late) christmas

YAYNESS! (Plus have you read the Snow Spider? It's really good. I need the next two books though.)

Hope you update soon, I check here once in a while3

Review. NOW WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!

Roflmao.

Please continue. Update soon!