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Reviews for: 13 Hallowed Nights: The First Night
Seiei 3/4/12 . chapter 1
Well, that was an amazing story you put together! You really managed to convey Samara's emotions. The feeling of being saved from her torment by this unknown guy, who she now sees as an Angel really spoke out. I suppose seeing her for the child that she truly is and not showing fear or contempt saved her. All in all a very well put together, cute short story.
MKBianca 5/8/11 . chapter 1
Superb, excellent. Everything was detailed so well and you manage to send me chills. I absolutely love it.

I'm hoping you could update soon.
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