Hello! Thanks for a good read!

keep going!

good job!

I liked the live your life moto, I mean its really a prominent theme and someone else with a newspaper who tells him the same thing was a wonderfull way to show it.

Too short but it was better than the last try next time.

I didn't care for this story but it was okay.

Ohh...that's a good story. I thought no one could be more mysterious than Gary. Okay...so he didn't hook up with Felicity. But that's okay, he got a chick in the end. It's about time. You are going to write more, aren't you? More about the blond chick,please...? It might need a little editing, but you should keep writing.

Sara

I thougt it was a really good story. You are a really good writer, you know that. I thought Gary was goig to get together with Falicity, but im glad he got a girl anyway! lol! He does need a love life. well I think your story was really good, and email when you write another!

Gary wouldn't act like that! I stopped readind after the first "chapter" I was too depressed with it!

I liked it! But there was one thing I didn't...ooooooh. Now I see. OH! I LIKED IT! Great job! I can't wait to read another story of yours! This li'l section of the site needs more stories. I'm currently working on one but it needs a LOT of editing. Great job and write on!

*GataFairy*

A cool start! It was funny when Chuck and Gary left Marissa with the check. But that's just like Gary, I mean with Felicity. He just met this girl and when she needs a place to stay, she sleeps on Gary's couch. How nice is that? Oh, and the paper is broke, that's good. Maybe this chick is from one of Gary's past lives and they knew each other and helped people out with the help of tomorrow's paper. Just a thought...it's late and I'm tired. But seriously you're a pretty good writer.

Feel free to e-mail me.

Sara

It waz very good keep it up.

This is cool! I've always thought that a woman should get the paper. Not to sound rudeor anything, but it's woman. Women is plural. DOn't mind me cuz I'm just a perfectionist even though in my fic there were overlooked errors. But I love it and KEEP GOING! I really wanna know what happens next! Oh and, very good descriptions of Gary rubbing his eyes...he does that a LOT. _

*GataFairy*