Why did you make Irvine such an asshole? He wasn't like that at all in the game. :

From the very first chapter I was expecting a lot of this story and I must say I wasn't disappointed. It's a very good story and you've totally got me addicted to it, I swear. I'm really looking forward to finding out how they'll deal with things and how this will finish - hopefully not too sickningly sweet, but sweet nonwtheless is what I hope for. But I especially hope that you'll continue this story eventually; I'm not gonna ask you to update tomorrow morning - I myself haven't updated my fic in over six months, shame on me - but, please, tell me you will continue it eventually? You cannot let me - leave all of us - down on this one!

Thank you for the wonderful reading time, even if it consumed a full vacation day (and a truly nice one it has been too!)

Wow this looks like one kickass of a story! It's well written, catchy and I really love the dynamics between the characters so far. You especially did a good job on writing Selphie and Irvine so far, they seem so true to themselves that it's almost surreal. Great first chapter, I'm eagerly looking forward to the next ones!

Wow... leaving the fanfic at such a dark note.

I never knew that ANYONE could do that? I think that you should seriously update. I really would like to see some development in the characters...

The ancient Galbadian script that Fujin was inspecting is making me very curious as to how the plot was going to get much more messed up and ugly. Then you just end with Ultimecia ACTUALLY being inside of Seif's HEAD :O

Come ON. You have GOT to update something. This is FAR from done and I want you to work on it. I don't care how little time you have to do so! You need to be DREAMING of Seifell you need to THINK of them CONSTANTLY!

They are such a sexy pair that you just CAN'T deny them! Now please go on ahead and work on this fanfic. I'm waiting faithfully and once this hectic story has been completed I'll be more than willing to poke you about your other fanfic. :)

There are some very good quotes that I would like to draw up from the past 19 chapters that I've read today... (yeah, i know that i'm weird for reading all of that in the span of a few hours) but I can't be bothered because this review is going to inspire you to write and remember where the hell the plot is supposed to go.

My words of advice and wisdom? STOP THAT FRIGGIN HIATUS AND WRITE! (seifer and zell speaking, i swear)

Come ON - i'm begging. it's been a while since i've read any seifell fanfics (i've totally EXHAUSTED every SINGLE fanfic in noire sensus for seiferxzell - yes, I am totally obsessive of this couple. :/ don't judge me xD) and since this hasn't been updated in... Hyne knows how long I would like to know that I will be alive to finish reading this epic story.

Alright, I'll stop pointing accusatory fingers at you and I'll leave you to your devices.

Lots of love from the black pit of doom,

Shuu

It's so good! I love it! -

so sweet! i absolutely love this chapter! the end made me so happy and fangirly askdjfskdj X)

Damn. I wanted to know what happened...It seemed like an excellent story, beautifully written in fact. One of the best fanfictions I have ever treated my eyes to viewing. Oh well.

Please finish this fic-it is too good to leave unfinished.

The characters are engaging, the plot is captivating...it lacks only resolution...

Please please please please finish this! It's so good and I so want to read the ending!

Please?

just letting you know that i read your fanfic and i really liked it. hope you plan on fishing it

I know it's been a really long time and no reason for me to keep my hope up...but won't you consider completing it at all? It's too good a story to be left as such a cruel cliffhanger.

Too bad you haven't updated in almost 5 years.. You're still alive aren't you..?

ahh! EVIL EVIL ULTIMECIA must be destroyed X_x plz keep writting this fanfic remember.. Seif/Zell is all powerful *0*.. sry i'm a little strange.. but when translated to normal speach, it's:

i enjoy ur fanfic very much and would love it even more if u were to update thank you

This is wonderful! Poor Seifer...I hope things will work out for him in the end. Please please please update soon!

Hi

It's been almost two years since I last time visited the fanfiction. All the good stories has ended or their authors never updated them.. :P

So please updtae this one if you can :)