awww,this was perfect.i loved minor flaw...it was Captain Laraunt not ,excellentèe.

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Nicely done "scene-we-didn't see." It's this kind of little fic that really helps give the movie more depth. It's not some 41-chapter epic about nothing, it's just a wee scene that adds another layer to what we see on the screen. Well done.

That was great! I wonder what else may have happened in those little moments we didn't see in the movie... More please?

Excellent story and very well written. I would have loved to read a longer storyline.

so cute! i love how you develop the characters

I'm glad your continuing writing "Ever After" stories. I love these little one shots and I really hope you write more. Maybe even a full length story in the future?

BTW, I loved it.

Oh my gosh, I absolutely love this. I was just watching the movie today and decided to check on FF, and this is wonderful! You captured it perfectly!

This was wonderful. I've also wondered what went on in the carriage before the "accident." Keep writing :)