| Reviews for The Moth and the Flame |
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I promise you that 1/17/11 . chapter 5Loovedd it! It had been so long I've read a Twilight story and this was pretty good! Can't wait for your next update! |
kat 1/16/11 . chapter 5 oddly enough i set out to find a story where a female harry after the war turns to the Cullens for emotional recovery. Didn't really beleive i would find anything but... I have to say her picking Forks off a map was a little cliche but oh well she had to get there somehow. To everyone who says this is slow obvisouly you need to reread Meyers or even JKR. And secondly the dialogue is actually very good if that translates to slow in your infinitesimal brains than perhaps you reread something else or perhaps watch tv. I hope you update soon. |
aishiteru naru 1/13/11 . chapter 5one will finally tell the truth to the other would be nice if someone would play bad ... jenna I hope you show the beginning of their relationship after the truth be told |
Xhre 1/13/11 . chapter 5 I think this fic start to get more interesting. But there is still a little bit boring here and there. I like your idea by reverse the line.. I will stick around to read how the story progress.. |
Ryle Culler 1/12/11 . chapter 5Awe and it was getting good! |
HinaLuvLuvChan 1/11/11 . chapter 5DAMN! NO! Why isn't there another chapter after this! I command you to update soon! ...please? x)) |
Bronze Star 1/11/11 . chapter 5i like it _ jenna is very likeable. Edward is too. |
dhh 1/11/11 . chapter 5I have to say, the chapter was too simple..It's too simple overall.. Sincerely, |
Fire Dolphin 1/10/11 . chapter 5wait! tht was a cruel ending! i sooo wanted to see edwards reaction to jenna just saying tht. i wonder if his siblings heard it too! cant wait to c the romance move forward. update soon |
Mickey 1/10/11 . chapter 5 I love it and can't wait for the next chapter |
Mfoto 1/10/11 . chapter 5Love it :D |
Yana5 1/10/11 . chapter 5noo don't leave it there |
lunarwing 1/10/11 . chapter 5hi there! I liked this chapter! it was fun toread and you left a pretty BIG cliff hanger there! well i really hope you update soon! and good work *lunarwing* |
candinaru25 1/10/11 . chapter 5Well i have to say that Edward is cute at the moment in this story. |
Basill 1/10/11 . chapter 5Oh. Wow! Update asap plz! |