Okay, the fic was good.

Now please excuse me, while I ramble on about something that, although irrelevant as far as the story is concerned, has bugged me nevertheless. You see, when Tobias became a "nothlit" (a person trapped in morph, all you non-fanatics), I accepted it. When the Ellimist sent him back to his house so that he could re-acquire his former human body, I thought that was a good developement. However, when the Animorphs retrieved the "morphing cube" (alright, I admit it, I've forgotten its name, and I can't be bothered to refer to the David trilogy or whatever.), he could've stayed in human form for more than two hours without fear. Why, you may ask? Well, it's blindingly obvious to me: Toby becomes a human nothlit. Then, shortly afterwards, he could touch the cube and once again have the power to morph - but this time without being stuck in the body of a hawk! Why hasn't anyone thought of that little loophole.?

Wow! I really like that one, are you planning a sequel? Michelle

It's awesome. What happened to Tom though? MORE!

Continue, will ya? I liked it, expect you had a few too many little extra.. things. I dunno, but the Alanis thing. That sorta thang. *blinks* Anyway, I'd give ya a 7/8. It had an good plot, but Marco was especially out of charcter.

That was pretty good. There were some problems though. I really doubt that the Yeerks would be gullible enough to fall for the Animorphs trick. Some parts were a bit confusing. This doesn't really have to do with the story, but surprisment is not a word and using such a big font makes your story somewhat annoying to read.

Aw that was so beautiful. Can we get a sequel? Can someonne's kids hook up with someone else's kids? Please please please?

Nice story. On a scale from 1-10, I give it a 9. Read my new fic called The Untold and review it.

It was told quickly. Slow down and give us some details! but besides that, it was good.

Aaawww!That was soooooooo sweet! Sappy and sweet! I loved it! ;)

You should continue this. it's REAL good!