|Reviews for Dawn of Thunder|
| Jamesousnorth 5/29/13 . chapter 12
I would like to inform you that you have done it again.
YOU HAVE BLOWN MY BRAINS!
My brains are on the floor man
Whatcha gonna do about that huh? The bits are jumping up and down in joy, weird no?
But in all seriousness, a fantastic story you've created here! Really like how Naruto's thunderous like personality has shaken Mira to the core! I'm really excited to see how things develop between Naruto and his girls, and you've done an amazing job with introducing Naruto universe characters! It's like they've always been there in the Fairy Tail universe!
Please do your best, which you also do, to update and continue impress all of your readers!
This is Jamesousnorth, a happy reviewer, signing out!
| lmc9389 5/28/13 . chapter 12
Excellent story kinda hard to follow at times but still very good. I say add hinata bc there's too much going on between them not to. Naruto can't be that dense and stupid not to notice. I hope you continue this story soon, you seem to start so many new stories that good ones get left behind in my opinion. Anyway well done
| Friskypole 5/20/13 . chapter 12
Sorry if you feel like I'm only criticising you - it's not my intention - but this is another big problem. 128k words in and you are barely starting up the plot. I mean, a few chapters til The Beast? That's... yeah.
| Friskypole 5/20/13 . chapter 7
Too much drama to be healthy. Practically a soap opera. Doesn't help much that the conversations are like 2000 words long each.
| Friskypole 5/20/13 . chapter 4
You are a very talented writer, but you have commitment issues with your stories, so to speak.
| Friskypole 5/7/13 . chapter 2
| Uzumaki-Shikai 4/4/13 . chapter 8
I can't read this anymore because its become to confusing for me. :(
| RElarax 4/1/13 . chapter 12
| Markus-Antonius 3/1/13 . chapter 12
Ha! that was awesome! I wasn't expecting Cana to be the one to get the first kiss! I can't wait for MIra to find out! Can anyone say Cat-fight?
| Markus-Antonius 3/1/13 . chapter 9
holy shit that was intense...
| Markus-Antonius 3/1/13 . chapter 8
oh now i feel kinda bad that hinata is going out there to die now... but i'm glad for that declaration that naruto has mira and cana
| Markus-Antonius 3/1/13 . chapter 7
i hope the love interests stay just as mira/naruto/cana and not hinata. i'm tired of naruto/hinata fics... and whats with naruto calling her hime getting all affectionate with her out of nowhere? and he can't be that dense with that kissing on the cheek scene and mira's anger can he?
| DeathOfTheBlackDragon 2/24/13 . chapter 12
I just started this story, and I have to say, GREAT JOB! You do a great job putting different anime together. I was very surprised when Hinata used Zangetsu's ability and all but it was cool. Thank you, and please continue to write amazing chapters.
| XJustified 2/23/13 . chapter 12
I'd love to see more of this if you are still willing to write more.
| Silent Bunshin 2/19/13 . chapter 12
I really like you story so far. I see it has been a while since you updated it. Is this story on hiatus or do you still plan to update it? If you are just needing inspiration I will be glad to work with you on this. I would love to see this story finished.