|Reviews for To Shape and Change|
| YafahShira 6/16/13 . chapter 33
Please upload soon! Am so eager to learn what happens next! :)
| Nytefyre 6/14/13 . chapter 33
This has been a fun ride and I truly enjoyed your writing. You wrote characters with depth and honesty and I think your take on problems and their solutions has been very plausible. I've really enjoyed the parselmagic aspect and Harry as healer first is a surprisingly good fit. I hope there will still be a coda, and look forward to it.
Thanks for posting!
| Artera Lysander 6/13/13 . chapter 33
This story is amazing. Can't wait to see how you're gonna end this. Please update
| alec-potter 6/12/13 . chapter 33
Nice story even with the abrupt ending.
| revolutionaryowl 6/11/13 . chapter 33
OMYGOD ITS ALMOST DONE JUST PLEASE UPDATE TIS IS AWESOME UPDATE ALREADY YOU ARE KILLING ME IN ANTICIPATION JUST please, update.
| Guest 6/10/13 . chapter 33
GIVE THE FINAL PART TO ME NOW! I jest, I jest. But seriously I need it like whoa. I've just reread the story, and man let me me tell ya , this is a damn good fic. My favourite among favorites.
| atdn 6/9/13 . chapter 2
I let out this enormous squeak at the last line. Eep. This is just such a great set-up, and your idea might not necessarily be unique, but it's ridiculously well-executed. I'M SO EXCITED TO READ THE REST OF THIS OMG.
| devo342 6/7/13 . chapter 1
| Alfirin-Lover 6/6/13 . chapter 33
... It's been over a year. Are you going to update soon? Are you okay?
| lilyginnyrose 6/6/13 . chapter 33
come on, it's nearly finished, please write the final chapters. Please?
| alys09 6/5/13 . chapter 33
Great story. Like the malfoy friendship.
| The Disappeared 6/5/13 . chapter 33
Did not expect it to end like that. Overall, this has been a great read. I'm going to give you some constructive criticism here, because it's something I appreciate myself and assume other authors do, too - that said, over the years I've run into two authors who were very upset with that criticism, so if you think you may be one of them, please stop reading here.
It felt a bit OOC on Harry's part (he acts way older than he does in the books from the very beginning; I realize some children are very mature, but he was particularly mature and far more so than in the books. Also, I seemed to catch onto your hints pretty easily. I realize you have to drop hints in order for things to make sense later, but I caught them pretty easily - basically, if you inserted some sort of extraneous information that didn't seem like it mattered, it was a giant blinking neon sign that it'd be important later. Currently I'm wondering about how Lily said "I'll either be dead or a squib." The squib thing was pretty unnecessary, so I'm going to take a wild stab in the dark and say it'll be important for later (either that or you tossed in something quite unnecessary) - just one example. The only reason I mention this is because I really don't tend to pick up on hints well and I've picked up on most everything here, including things I don't think you want me to - best if we can see with 20-20 hindsight, but I shouldn't be able to see this clearly looking ahead.
Just my thoughts. I really do like this fic (I don't put the effort into critiquing something if it's not already good with the potential to be even better), although many times I did have to yell at my inner critic to just shut up and enjoy the fic without dissecting it too much. It was a fun ride and I look forward to the next chapter. :)
| shannyauburn 6/5/13 . chapter 33
Great chapter! I loved it!
| Xan015 6/3/13 . chapter 20
Great chapter :)
| Scaehime-KingofKing's Daughter 6/2/13 . chapter 33
As you've probably recognized by now, you have many people eagerly awaiting the final chapter of this epic fic.
This is the first HP time-travel fic I've read involving Snape going back, and it's been brilliant.
I liked the rune motif, and your version of Lily's protection of Harry.
God bless, Scae