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| Reviews for To Shape and Change |
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   Eviline 4/29/13 . chapter 12Loving it. Brilliant how he is ingraining acceptance of Parselmagic! Lupin must be ecstatic! |
| breakingheart93 4/28/13 . chapter 33 YES! GO HARRY! w00t (O) (O) (O) ah yeah dance like no ones watching cuz Voldiebutt is dead *i hope* :D |
| Eien Michi 4/27/13 . chapter 5 Each time I read DADA, makes me laugh, but I know it would be annoying to write Defense Against Dark Arts each time. No alternative? |
| squiditch 4/26/13 . chapter 33 I just happened across this story and am very impressed with your take on the HP universe. Looking forward to seeing how it all winds up. |
| Achalon 4/25/13 . chapter 24 Right, because curing all Werewolves at eleven isn't too much pressure, but asking him to swiftly heal his headmaster is far too much... You would have been better off just admitting to not thinking ahead and leaving a pretty huge plot hole than trying to justify your misstep in the author notes of chapter 25. I am really enjoying the idea you have here, but I am also really hoping I don't come to regret that in future chapters. Because, if the plot starts to only make sense if I go through chapters excusing things not making sense as being, "For story development, just ignore it..." - Well, I am going to be sad and just stop reading anyway. Basically, people are right. Your pushed WAY too much into first year. It was hard enough to suspend belief for that, but then you just keep asking the readers to ignore more. It's so annoying, because that is such a turn off for a story, but I -want- to keep liking this story. The idea is great. / |
| ronjon 4/24/13 . chapter 33 This was a really great ride! I was afraid you would leave us hanging without finishing off Voldemort but you didn't. Now it has been almost a full 4 months so do you think you might write the Epilogue or are you finished? I'll keep an eye out for the wind-up. Hope you are up for it. I hate to leave these people. |
| Lavedovanera 4/23/13 . chapter 33 Cool! Update soon! |
| Danaan 4/23/13 . chapter 33 I have thouroughly enjoyed this story and look forward to it's conculsion. Thanks! |
| Guest 4/21/13 . chapter 9 The Yoda quote came from Episode 1, which came out in 1999; Harry Potter is set in the early '90s, quite before that movie, and therefore that quote. Other than that fairly major timeline problem, I've liked the story quite better than most so far. |
| LBII 4/21/13 . chapter 33 Very Good Story! Looking forward to the end. Thanks for your time and effort. |
| Legeti 4/20/13 . chapter 1 Read this entire thing in one night... and damn. That cliffhanger. |
| Elysia1 4/20/13 . chapter 3 Hey! Cool story. I just think Snape is too OOC. He needs some of his snarkiness back! :) |
| ImmortalWar 4/19/13 . chapter 33 WTH...DUDE! THEN WHAT? Come on you cant leave me hanging on the awesomeness that was that chapter! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE |
| monbade 4/19/13 . chapter 33 very good story, waiting on the last chapter. monbade |
| Ragnar92 4/18/13 . chapter 23 Okay- WTF? Since when did normal police have guns? Take your militarized population and get the hell out my country! :) |
