Absolutely love this story! Really can't wait to see what happens in the little love triangle! Also what happens with Nixon! You've got his personality down perfect! Please update soon!

Hi! :)

First of all I was so excited your back and with 3 chapters too! I was sooo busy & haven't had time to read them until now

I do agree the last chapter ended pretty abruptly but your adding in info that wasn't in the show so really that's a plus no matter howit ends :)

I have enjoyed these chapters a lot. It's nice to see her relationship with bill is getting back to where it was.

We haven't really had any joe in awhile though...I'm assuming they are still together though?

Its great you've brought the "flashforwards" back into the story...sometimes I forget betty is even from the future even if she doesn't remember. So I think it's really interesting you've brought aspect of it back into the story.

Absolutely cannot wait for the next one (hopefully with more joe.)

Ruth

Love the fact u included stuff from the book as well

Really good couple of chapters. I like how you've made up some of your own events- it makes it even more interesting!
Frankie

Awesome! Real good twist with Bill as well!

I am so hooked please Update soon.
Could there maybe be a nother Girl sneaking i to the story?

Hi!

You have no idea how excited I was to see you back writing again.

I had to read a few of the earlier chapters to remember what was going on, which was kinda cool revisiting a story I love.

I really enjoyed this chapter though I was sad to see the girls go.

Please update soon

Ruth

Hey! His story is incredible! Be sure to update it please! )))

I'm not sure how I feel about the developments in this chapter lol

There's so many different ways you take it now.

I really loved the chapters & the engaged couple being bill & Fran I didn't see was so great to read something on this website & genuinely be surprised at the story developments.

I feel like so far Joe has taken what happened between Betty & Bill really well, which isnt really what I expected to be honest.

I'm having a hard time figuring out if it's Claire or Betty who loves Joe as the story mentions or if they aren't really different anymore. Like the 2 people in 1 mind have kind of merged together somehow.

I'm really excited to see where you take this.

Ruth

Oh my. So much happened. I guessed this was where you were headed but it was still emotionaly draining to read it. Can't wait for the rest of the story.

Love the story. Need a little Joey fix when you next update. Can never get enough.

That is so unfair! I want to know what's going on.

Great chapters & I am so so happy you're back.

I'm a I'll disappointed that there's hardly any joe (but then again I can never get enough of joe he's such a great character)

I'm really curious about the memory she was Betty engaged in modern times?

I'm glad you had Betty sent to chilton to learn how to parachute. So many other authors on this site have their characters learn with the boys which never seems like a realistic notion to me.

I'm once again addicted to your story & I really hope you update again soon.

Ruth

So glad you're back. I've been waiting for an update for ages.

I enjoyed that chapter a lot. It was nice to get a reminder that Betty is actually from another time & staying in the war is a really big decision for her to make.

I did feel like the chapter was a little rushed but that's probably because of how it's portrayed in the show rather than how you wrote it.

As always I can't wait for the next one & I'm super curious on what you're going to do with upcoming Holland episodes

Ruth

Holy hell that was a good chapter.

You wrote those battle scenes so well.A good balance between what's happening externally & inside Betty's head.

I usually struggle reading the battle scenes ppl write cause it just feels like something doesnt connect properly but I flew through chapter.

I think what you did with joe shooting that German with a pistol was a really interestn idea. I assume your trying to introduce the idea that war really brings into question who you think a person is?

I think you write the relationships really well in this story & i always feel like I'm missing something that's going on just beneath the surface with these characters. It definately keeps me coming back to see what happens next

Can't wait for the next chapter (as usual)

Ruth

wow another great chapter!

sounds like your bringing into play too many love interests lol i like her with joe (although the tension and possibility makes great storylines)

it seems like something was off with joe in the truck lol

was this more of a filler chapter?to introduce buck? cause it didnt really seem like a lot happened ( though i enjoyed itheaps anyways)

Im looking forward to the first bit of conflict they all face together to see what kind of responses and emotions it drags up in everyone.

as usual lol i cant wait for the next one

Ruth

PS I had no idea buck compton died today so thankyou so much for bringing it to my attention, i think it was nice and very respectful that you took the time to mention him at the start of the chapter