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| Big T 2005-08-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseArmitage I was the first anime movie i watched and finally i found someone that rights stories to give it some justice . the story is well rounded but maybe you can give a little more detail next time and for you being hurt or sick sorry about it i have only had a busted leg but my sister has had some birth defects and has been in for 30 surgeries so dont worry about it and if you think of something while you are in pain your pain will fade away and you wont even notice it .keep up the good work . yahoo im name ( Metalfushi |
| Aaron Moen 2003-12-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseNot bad it's perobabley beter then eneething ive ever riten. I am waitting for the next chapter. The caricters seem to be ... I doent no how to xplane it but thay seem to be filling out mor. |
| bitchy brunette 2003-07-12 ch 2,  | abuseAh! You can't call that second part a chapter! It was too short. I want to know where this is going, so don't just leave it hanging. |
| LSR-7 2003-04-13 ch 2, | abusePretty good and so far the people are in character, but the chapters are really short. But yes, so far pretty good. |
| LSR-7 2003-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI just recently saw "Armitage" for the very first time. I saw both Polymatrix and Dual Matrix. I'm glad to have found a few fanfics for it. |
| Rae chan1 2003-03-19 ch 2, | abuseVery good! Though you should try and make seperate paragraphs for this chapter. I can't wait for more! Go Armitage writers! RAWR!! ^_^;; ~~Rae chan |
| Duskie 2003-03-10 ch 2, | abuseO I went looking for one of these ages ago. I'm so glad theres one on FF.net now and its even by a good writer |
| Demoness Space Pirate 2003-03-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, my eyes do not deceive me, there is actually an Armitage section and not only that but the first fanfic is great! This is a good day, oh and if you ever find the time check out the Armitage OAV or is it OVA, too tired to think straight, but oddly enough it's so much better than the movie, though the ending doesn't reach you like the movie does. ~You fellow Armitage the third watcher DSP! |
| Sippio 2003-03-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat job glad to see this. and lets hope this is only the first of many Armitage fics to come graet job. Keep it up. |
| Dark Magician Of Chaos 2003-02-27 ch 2, | abuseKaneda: Finally! An Armitage the Third section! Yami Tetsuo: YAY! Kaneda: ANyway good story! UPDATE! |
| snootchiebootchie 2002-10-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story is an excellent start. I like how you expressed Ross's thoughts. Keep on working on this one. It's good so far. |
| Droids 2002-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abusegood story keep on writing |
| Multi-Facets 2002-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell it's about time I found one of these! You present an interesting quandary for our heroes. What _will_ they do? I'm eager to find out. Two tips, though: It's easier on the reader if you begin a new paragraph each time someone speaks. And I'm sure others would appreciate a little more detailing. No offense meant. |
| Leese 2002-04-10 ch 1, | abuseGood beginning. Will there be more? You write the characters very well. I'd love to read more! |