did you die update its been 6 years dude

Armitage I was the first anime movie i watched and finally i found someone that rights stories to give it some justice . the story is well rounded but maybe you can give a little more detail next time and for you being hurt or sick sorry about it i have only had a busted leg but my sister has had some birth defects and has been in for 30 surgeries so dont worry about it and if you think of something while you are in pain your pain will fade away and you wont even notice it .keep up the good work . yahoo im name ( Metalfushi

Not bad it's perobabley beter then eneething ive ever riten. I am waitting for the next chapter. The caricters seem to be ... I doent no how to xplane it but thay seem to be filling out mor.

Ah! You can't call that second part a chapter! It was too short. I want to know where this is going, so don't just leave it hanging.

Pretty good and so far the people are in character, but the chapters are really short.

But yes, so far pretty good.

I just recently saw "Armitage" for the very first time. I saw both Polymatrix and Dual Matrix. I'm glad to have found a few fanfics for it.

Very good! Though you should try and make seperate paragraphs for this chapter. I can't wait for more! Go Armitage writers! RAWR! _;;

Rae chan

O I went looking for one of these ages ago. I'm so glad theres one on now and its even by a good writer

Wow, my eyes do not deceive me, there is actually an Armitage section and not only that but the first fanfic is great! This is a good day, oh and if you ever find the time check out the Armitage OAV or is it OVA, too tired to think straight, but oddly enough it's so much better than the movie, though the ending doesn't reach you like the movie does.

You fellow Armitage the third watcher DSP!

Great job glad to see this. and lets hope this is only the first of many Armitage fics to come graet job. Keep it up.

Kaneda: Finally! An Armitage the Third section!

Yami Tetsuo: YAY!

Kaneda: ANyway good story! UPDATE!

This story is an excellent start. I like how you expressed Ross's thoughts. Keep on working on this one. It's good so far.

good story keep on writing

Well it's about time I found one of these! You present an interesting quandary for our heroes. What _will_ they do? I'm eager to find out. Two tips, though: It's easier on the reader if you begin a new paragraph each time someone speaks. And I'm sure others would appreciate a little more detailing. No offense meant.

Good beginning. Will there be more?

You write the characters very well. I'd love to read more!