Interesting.

Hot! Dude, I never would have been able to picture EMMETT of all people a God's man. It's just so unlikely after hearing all of his 'adventures' with Rosalie . . . But at least Edward got with Bella. You know, I've always liked it when that happens.

Brother Edward saw the light! Two lost, unhappy souls found one another. Sweet story!

A very nice story, well done.

I really liked this story. I liked how Bella dreamed of Edward, and how meeting each other and having their beautiful encounter in the meadow took them away from lives they hated and into a new life together.

Such a well told story of wonder and discovery, I didn't want them to head out just yet. It makes me wish I knew where they headed next.

I like that the innocence is what seemed to make them both, but Bella especially, so very brave. Yet, without losing her sweetness.

Thank you for sharing your words!

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I really enjoyed this story, one of the more unique stories in the Cherry Exchange. I loved the back and forth of will they stay together or won't they? Love conquers all. Very well written, thanks for sharing.

yeah, I love this story as I love historical romance. I would love to see more of their life

Very beautiful. ;)

Adam and Eve indeed!…..who’d have thought a monk could be so sexy ‘Holy shit’ that was a well written scene!

You told the story beautifully, and the feel of the times came across well. The unfairness of the whole scenario where Edward was given to God against his will by his father and how the Brothers tried to force him to stay. It was typical behaviour of the era in which it was set.

Well done!

So beautifuly written; One can almost hear the heavenly music of those ages. The practices back then were so cruel and unfair; but the worst part of it is that it was similar up to our grandparents days

Great oneshot- you did a really good job in an unusal storyline.

I would love to see another chapter of this once the contest is over:)

Me x

Hauntingly beautiful. I loved the historical setting and the fact that Edward and Bella each faced such bleak futures until they found each other. What a wonderful story!

Great story!

:)

"Your face holds the same sadness I feel. Have you never lived free?"

And they show each other just how amazing freedom can be...I. LOVED. THIS! I was engrossed from the beginning and felt so sorry for him. And then for her. And now I just feel happy that they have their outcome. Bravo!