a few spelling flubs but they aren't critical. Hyporhetically, if crystal tokyo disappeared then Rini would too, she couldn't exist at all if she was never born.

is darien really dead or is he gonna come back to life later on in the story?

Oh my gosh! I'm already in love with this story. I hope you continue, and quickly. It gave me chills. Very, very good start.

I love this and I love you.