 anon 11/21/10 . chapter 2 Hermione should be Sandpaw (but ends up liking Ron) and Ron should be Graypaw. No idea who Dustpaw would be. Perhaps Dustpaw can be Draco Malfoy? |
 dreamingneverfails 11/21/10 . chapter 2 ron-mousewhisker:gray and white tom with blue eyes
hermoine-brairlight:dark brown she cat (it doesnt say her eye color) |
 Swanstream 11/21/10 . chapter 2Gingerpelt or graystripe for ron
Brushflower or ferncloud for hermione. okay. |
 Swanstream 11/21/10 . chapter 1haha, definetly Shorty. lol! |
 Echo Nightingale 11/21/10 . chapter 2 Hermione should be Mousefur from ThunderClan and Ron should be Flametail from ShadowClan |
 flechette mango 11/21/10 . chapter 2Awesome story!
You are still missing commas though.
Can't wait for next chap.! |
 BluestarOakheart forever 10/21/10 . chapter 1 great story swanstarr
you seriously should put it in the crossover section
ireckon
Dudley should be called Bone
PLZ update soon |
 Lady of Chaos and Discord 10/21/10 . chapter 1Ether Coal or Bone. Hermione sound a lot like Hunnyfern or Ferncloud... |
 anon 10/21/10 . chapter 1 SMUDGE! Dudley should be Smudge! :D Cool story. |
 flechette mango 10/21/10 . chapter 1Diddykin's name should be... NosePath!
Heh random name made up on the spot
Awesome story! I really can't wait for the next chap! |