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anon 11/21/10 . chapter 2
Hermione should be Sandpaw (but ends up liking Ron) and Ron should be Graypaw. No idea who Dustpaw would be. Perhaps Dustpaw can be Draco Malfoy?
dreamingneverfails 11/21/10 . chapter 2
ron-mousewhisker:gray and white tom with blue eyes

hermoine-brairlight:dark brown she cat (it doesnt say her eye color)
Swanstream 11/21/10 . chapter 2
Gingerpelt or graystripe for ron

Brushflower or ferncloud for hermione. okay.
Swanstream 11/21/10 . chapter 1
haha, definetly Shorty. lol!
Echo Nightingale 11/21/10 . chapter 2
Hermione should be Mousefur from ThunderClan and Ron should be Flametail from ShadowClan
flechette mango 11/21/10 . chapter 2
Awesome story!

You are still missing commas though.

Can't wait for next chap.!
BluestarOakheart forever 10/21/10 . chapter 1
great story swanstarr

you seriously should put it in the crossover section

ireckon

Dudley should be called Bone

PLZ update soon
Lady of Chaos and Discord 10/21/10 . chapter 1
Ether Coal or Bone. Hermione sound a lot like Hunnyfern or Ferncloud...
anon 10/21/10 . chapter 1
SMUDGE! Dudley should be Smudge! :D Cool story.
flechette mango 10/21/10 . chapter 1
Diddykin's name should be... NosePath!

Heh random name made up on the spot

Awesome story! I really can't wait for the next chap!
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