Awesome. I like this version of the events better, though the way they had it was pretty good. Catch ya on the flip side.

nice

nice fic

That was a good fanfic. By the way, have you ever noticed how unbelievable Karone's change from evil to good was? I mean, come on, she was raised as evil. It should have at least taken longer.

Wow, a great twist to what happened in the show! I enjoyed it. Great job!

good story!

Cool. I have a different version of how Astronema found out she was Karone, too.

very sweet. i liked the scene when their in the cave and around the fire. very cozy:) if it snags your fancy, maybe write a zhane and karone fic next?

that was good

Arielle