This was amazing! There were a lot of grammatical errors, but I don't care. The story was purely amazing. I almost cried at the end.

Whoa weird. Yeah, that's bizarre. But well-written. Catch ya on the flip side.

A little rushed, but besides that, it was ok.

Sad story, but it was well written. The only thing I have a problem with is that there was no warning of suicide or main character death. There really, really needs to at least be a suicide warning, especially with the prevelance of teenage suicide.

YOU KILLED TOMMY!THAT IS WHY YOU ARE AN ASSHOLE!

you could you!

Pretty good dark story but eum perhaps a weak ending. Well the only thing you can do is to learn of your mistakes. Good job

wow that must have been some mood. The fic was good except for the ending. Oh and did you forget Ernie does know Aisha. I hope you don't have another of these moods. This was too depressing for me.

nice shock with the death. very unexpected

::wipes moist eyse:: Ok maybe not. but I was a little misty eyed when i read it the first time and 30 times later I still think it's good :P