Loved it!

Amazing ficlet. Must read!

Awesome story. :) Love your Jensen.

Amusing in placed but also very powerful

Great job. I think the last one could/should have been a separate story - would have liked to have seen more of that.

awwwwww that was brilliant!

awesome job! :)

They were all good, but I think Roque's was my favorite.

Very...

Love the last one very fluffy. I think that could be the true color of Jensen's character... and it's a start for slash between them... grin...

Clay - it was awesome... lol

Rogue - poor Jensen

Pooch - I think that he wished not to see him with make up.

Aisha - she had a good day... grin...

Cougar - the best, what can i say?

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Thank you for writing it sweetie, it was perfect.

Keep writing.

*Hugs & Kisses*

Have a great weekend and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

I thought you did a good job with this 5-shot. It didn't seem that choppy to me. There were a few grammatical errors but they didn't disrupt the story, at least for me.

Yes, the 5th one was sad, but I thought it was two great scenes. I believe it's my favorite. (My second favorite is Aisha's.) And even though you said this wasn't slash, I like to think of the 5th one in that light. They are just such a great couple and even if they don't mean too, they act like such a great couple.

Thank you again LaylaBinx for an excellent fic. I definitely cannot wait for more. Have a great night. JP

sooo good