That was great, it should have been in the show.

very nice, i haven't watched a lot of episodes, but i could picture it all in my mind in detail with each character's language. I've never seen Katastrophe, but I will probably see it sometime. good fic.

Intriguing! "Katastrophe" is one of the best episodes – if not *the* best episode – of the show's first season, and I'm slowly realizing that it should have been a two-part episode. I'm basically just repeating what's been stated in the other reviews, but, yes, what you've written could have been in the show if they just had had the time to insert this. A nice addendum to the actual episode!

Wow, Very cool. The personalitys run true. Write more soon - Stancy McKatt

Cool story K.S, and I agree with Kris that would've been a good addition to the episode had they had enough time.

And nicely written to, mi amigo _.

-Rebecca.

Very nice! True to the story and the characters. And great Viper!

Oooo... Nice addition to the episode. Filling in those little details. I could see this being in there if the show had had the time.