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jay 1/31/07 . chapter 7
really good story. really it is. if you have the time it would be cool if you did a sequel really it would be cool.
Ayanako 1/9/07 . chapter 7
Wow, the last chapter. A few month ago, I would have laughed (or cried, dunno) if someone told me this day would come

I really like the ending, its kinda like I expected it to be, just great. If you write a sequel, I would be darn happy xD
DarthAnimus 1/8/07 . chapter 7
ALRIGHT! It's finished! Way to go! Woot! *waves pom poms*

And it was such a nice ending too. I especially liked hoe Gruffi's feminine side showed, and Gusto was so precious! I really liked the way you wrote Ursa in this chapter aswell. She was such a powerful character, no one wanted to mess with her. Pretty much like in the series.

It's really great how you tied all the loose ends in this story. You focused on the endings/beginnings of all the characters, not just the lead ones. This is something that really disturbs me when it's not done properly but you came through just fine.

I really feel inspired now. I think I'll finally start my own Gummi Bears fic. I've been supposed to start it for pretty much a year now. But I've been focusing on my other fics so much that I completely forgot about it.
Growly Genet 11/12/06 . chapter 1
I don't know why I never found this story before - I've certainly been on the site long enough. Then again, I'm happy to have come in towards the end so hopefully there won't be a long wait for the last chapter. I applaud you at taking a very serious approach to the Gummi Bears universe - and even more for the slash, which is impossible to find in the Gummi fandom. To my delight, you even wrote Gruffi/Gusto, my favourite slash pairing. Not only is this fic an enjoyable read - it's inspired me to go back to work on Gummi Bears fanfiction, something which I never had the nerve to do when I was younger. .
Ayanako 6/13/06 . chapter 6
Yeah *dance* A new chapter. I didnt belive in it anymore, sorry but Im hyper now XD Please keep it up. Pleze
Gummadoon Fanatic 5/31/06 . chapter 6
Cool! This was a great update!

It was hilarious, I certainly like Delphi character, particularly her bluntness. ;)

Plz update soon!
DarthAnimus 5/8/06 . chapter 5
You updated! Yay! Thanks for informing me or I might have found out a month later or something...

It's shorter than the previous chapters but the quality makes up for it. I can't believe how much happened in this chapter! And how well you wrote it all!

...I really should start writing that fanfic I was planning months ago. I guess I'll start today.
Gummadoon Fanatic 5/8/06 . chapter 5
Cool!

That was a great update. I glad to see you finally decided to continue this fic. I've added you to my fav.

Keep up the good work and update soon!
DarthAnimus 10/6/05 . chapter 4
Ek! *squeal of joy* A slashy Gummi Bears fanfic! I can't believe this! It even has Gruffi/Gusto pairing! What more could I possibly want? ...maybe the next chapter?

I just watched some old taped Gummi Bears episodes a few days ago, and I decided to go and see if there is any fanfics about them. And I actually found a slash fic! :D

I'm a fan of slash(it's a free country) and I think that Gruffi and Gusto would make the perfect couple. I was thinking that if I didn't find any fics with the pairing, I would do my own.(And I'm still planning on it.)

The biggest plus for your story comest from your talent to write! I never thought that I would come across a story with this much emotion. Simply wonderful! I salute you!

(an after note: I added your story to my favorites) ;)
michi 1/8/05 . chapter 4
i must say, your fanfiction is so wonderful ...and I am a secret supporter of the pairing Gusto and Gruffi! Please, continoue with this story, please! I dont have much patience! hihi! Its so great! I like it very much1 Michi!
Ellie 2/7/04 . chapter 4
Oh no... Hang on, Please conzinue it, this Story is so good
PLEASE CONTINUE ARGH...
Hotaru Aino 12/15/03 . chapter 4
*absently reaches for the next chapter* o_O oro? *goes to look* there's... no more? *glomps* and it's been such a long time since the last update too T_T it's so well written and you're right, Slash is hard to find in this category.. it must be treasured... Please write the fifth anthem soon, I can't wait!
Gummadoon Fanatic 6/3/03 . chapter 4
NO! don't leave it there, you got to keep writing it so good and awesome, please update soon.
Kedi 5/20/03 . chapter 4
Oh! You can't leave it at THAT! I never thought I'd hear myself say this about a "slash-fic" but please finish it! I'm usually not a big fan of slash, but this one was so exciting I just had to read just a little bit more ... Please write more, and make it good and angsty! (*looks at what I just wrote* Man, that sounded harsh. Oh well.) Finish it, will 'ya?
Nenia 4/6/03 . chapter 4
Finally, I realized as well that you updated. ;)

I like the new chapter, although I have to say that Delphi was laughing a little too much. Maybe it's because I'm a little tired right now but I didn't find the situations she laughed in so funny. It makes her appear a little childish.

Otherwise: it's awesome how much time and effort you put into creating a whole history for Ursalia and Vorallia. You have my standing ovations for that. :)

I watched The Gummi Bears when I was a child and feel often sorry for not being fascinated by their story anymore because it was written for children. Your story is somehow darker, more serious and mature. Whenever I'm reading it, it feels a little like visiting an old friend and see that he has grown up, too. Thank you for this "reunion".

And sorry for all the metaphors ... it's almost 6am here and I haven't slept all night. ;)
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